Truely an amazing story hope to see more soon.

Tien has three eyes. That makes him a tryclops.

Hello,
I truly enjoy this story that you have written. I was apprehensive at first about reading this story, but truly love how it was written and the direction that you are taking.
I hope that you would be willing continue when you are ready.
Thank you

awesome now UPDATE!

this chapter was great. please update soon.

wow, you are doing a pretty good job!

keep them coming, and try to throw in some B/V, other wise it will become monotonous.

waiting for the next chapter...

Wow great story please upadate soon.

pleae please please please PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPPIE! I ADORE THIS AND THEY ARE MY FAVORITE COUPLE! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPPIE! I ADORE THIS STORY! PLEASE I REALLY NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS WITH THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOU
! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I ADORE THIS! ARGIGATOU!




...i think i went a little over board...sorry

This is a really great story! ^^ I am truly enjoying it and hope that you will continue. Vegeta in anger management is genius! The whole fic is awesome and the idea is very creative. There is one thing however I wanted to mention, and I promise that this is not a flame!! It's just that you tend to change tenses. -_- You alternate between past tense and past perfect tense. I'm not a grammar freak or anything but it really pulls me out of the story when I go form reading Chichi cracked her knuckles, to Chichi cracks her knuckles. The tense really should be the same for the whole story. Most writers use the simple past tense (cracked)as it's more comfortable to read and to write in. It disrupts the flow when you change tenses. Mostly I noticed it in your fight scenes (which were really good)that you would change your tense. Please don't be upset, I only mention it because I like this story so much. Other then that outstanding work. I can't wait for your next update!

Yay you updated. Thanks. I love this chapter, poor chi chi being torn between her people and Kakarot, *sigh* whats a girl to do. Anyway great chapter please update soon.

Well bout time u update this story plz update soon plz

OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY. Please update soon. I see that you haven't in a while but please do, this is one of the best stories that i have read. PLEASE PLEASE UDATE

Great story, but you've left a cliff hanger thats stood like that for months, i love this story, as well as parralel, and you have to finish them, PLEASE. 10 out of 10

No! I have to know what happens next. Oh my! I really liked this story. I've been looking all over for a Goku/ChiChi story that didn't have Goku grossly out of character and I was beginning to think I would never find one until I saw this one.

You don't understand how much Goku's characterization makes or breaks the story. But dang, I hope you finish this.

dude i have read this story like ten times!! Chichi kick some major **!! i love this couple to death and the way u portray them is awesome!! new chappies plz!!