A great story. I liked the part where the team found Sara.

your first fic? Err.. WOW! You are gifted!!

Oh please write another story. I can't keep rereading this one !

This is really good.

OMG, no matter how many times I read this I am blown away each and every time. It is brilliant and I love it so very much!

Wow. Really, really good.

wow, beautiful story and very well written. I hope we see more from you. Well done

WOW! That was beautiful and so heart wrenching! My heart cried for the little girl Sara. You made her so realistic! Wonderful job on your first fic!

If this is the first you have ever written. Oh my gosh! what a talent and gift you have. The flow and thought in this is fantastic. I hope you write more.

Absolutely wonderful- what else can I say? I love how you captured Sara's struggles with her past, and showed how they surface even in her life today. I love how you showed the impact of her upbringing- you know that it had to have affected who she is today. I also love that Grissom is the opposite of her father in every way- exactly what Sara needs in her life.

Hard to believe this is your first CSI fanfic. Do you write for other fandoms?? If so, what ones and where do you post?

Excellent job.

Wow, that was amazing. With your imagery I could picture each and every moment of your story perfectly. Brilliant.

Rach.

This was a beautiful and moving piece! Thanks so much for sharing! I hope to read more from you!

First off, love the title. Secondly, I think this was a great insight to Sara's inner struggles. It explains a lot about why she's always so determined.

I like this. Its different. You sustain, and that isn't easy. Thanks.

wow that was your first? that was really really good! I like it :p and I really hope Sara lives!