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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-18 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where the team found Sara. |
| nik 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseyour first fic? Err.. WOW! You are gifted!! |
| Famous4it 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh please write another story. I can't keep rereading this one ! |
| mossley 2007-11-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. |
| cabooklover21 2007-09-07 ch 1, | abuseOMG, no matter how many times I read this I am blown away each and every time. It is brilliant and I love it so very much! |
| angry penguin 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWow. Really, really good. |
| Amanda Hawthorn 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusewow, beautiful story and very well written. I hope we see more from you. Well done |
| litbuff 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseWOW! That was beautiful and so heart wrenching! My heart cried for the little girl Sara. You made her so realistic! Wonderful job on your first fic! |
| hollyu 2007-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseIf this is the first you have ever written. Oh my gosh! what a talent and gift you have. The flow and thought in this is fantastic. I hope you write more. |
| Christine Lauzon 2007-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAbsolutely wonderful- what else can I say? I love how you captured Sara's struggles with her past, and showed how they surface even in her life today. I love how you showed the impact of her upbringing- you know that it had to have affected who she is today. I also love that Grissom is the opposite of her father in every way- exactly what Sara needs in her life. Hard to believe this is your first CSI fanfic. Do you write for other fandoms?? If so, what ones and where do you post? Excellent job. |
| bellabug 2007-07-01 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was amazing. With your imagery I could picture each and every moment of your story perfectly. Brilliant. Rach. |
| Bower 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseThis was a beautiful and moving piece! Thanks so much for sharing! I hope to read more from you! |
| JesSickUh 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseFirst off, love the title. Secondly, I think this was a great insight to Sara's inner struggles. It explains a lot about why she's always so determined. |
| seeyoustandingthere 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Its different. You sustain, and that isn't easy. Thanks. |
| The Queen of Sin 2007-06-23 ch 1, | abusewow that was your first? that was really really good! I like it :p and I really hope Sara lives! |