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| Mabru Black 2008-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseLOL! Nice writing, good comedy... Loved the Hiashi part (overprotective parents are really funny) and the tho important things were the right way of finishing the fic...really a very good work! |
| Mallet Percussionist 2008-07-14 ch 1, | abuseWell...that pretty much disbands the myth that males can't write fanfics. Wow. There's actually someone out there who can write about a kiss and not elaborate on it. *grins* Hey, kiip on writing! Or else...*points gun*. Nah, just kidding! *snickers* |
| gingystar555 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseLMAO then later turned into a nymphomaniac from years of sexual frustration... hahahaha that just made my day u have no idea :D |
| bomber68 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abusethat was a very funny story |
| Nei eh 2008-01-04 ch 1, | abuseHA! nice. hinata a nympho cause by years of pent up sexual frustration. i like that |
| sshhhhhhhhh 2007-12-05 ch 1, | abusena not a perv...;) lol but that did m\ake me laugh hehe Aw naruhina are very cute |
| Ame no Kirichi 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseMwhahaha. That was awesome. It's so hard for me to find good stories. I'm eternally grateful that you reviewed mine so I could find yours. I'm not all that great at compliments, but that was probably one of the greatest things I've ever read. |
| Altrict 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseHah, amazing. Perverted, great humor, and proper grammar! (Not to mention great descriptions. I wish I could steal your skills.) I expected no less from you! It's all the makings of a great story. (You should make a story. I think I mentioned this before... But I'm serious!) It's the perverted part that gets me. Latent nymphomaniac was awsome word choice. I love the pervertedness. I tried to replicate your pervertedness in my recent chapter but to no avail. I can't do perverted. But it's an epic read. (Especially if you can picture it.) Well if you're a perv then that makes two of us. Personally, I don't see what's so wrong with it other than... A bad image. PS: How do you make words flow? |
| braindamage730 2007-06-25 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAHAHA HAD ME CRACKING UP |
| Kokari 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuselol mou... i feel kinda bad for hinata... ^^" |
| Lunarangel's Dark Flame 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseI loved it! It was sweet and funny and the ending was great! The perfect way to disband the fan club and bad pessimistic Naru-kun. Great job. Bai-Bai! |
| Youkai kagami 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseAh, I loved it! I'm heading off to a very stressful exam this morning, and I'm SO glad I took the time to check my e-mail and read this lovely bit of fluff... Funny AND cute! With appropriate satirical references and snide remarks. Luff it. Luff you. |
| Saotome Kyuubi 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseBwahahaha... need I say more? Only thing that didn't quite fit the style was the shotgun proposal thing. 'Threatened into proposing on katana point' or something would've been more fitting. Unless of course Hiashi had a Remington 'Daughter's decency preserver' model stashed in his locker... now with pump-action and extended magazine. |
| Butterfree 2007-06-17 ch 1, | abuse"Pfft, an army of Pokemon-crazed kids is more dangerous than a sealed demon. Trust me on that." lol, I'm a pokemon crazed kid XD "He looked at them with chibified eyes and manifested fox ears (made from chakra) on his head." Wow, I can't imagine a 15-year old Naruto doing that ^^; ~ CupidKirby |
| meredith 2007-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abusenice fic |