This is really good; I love Three Days Grace. :]

omg

cant wait tll u update

Awesome 'shot. This really could be exactly what Fang was thinking about in the original SOF.

Cool, I liked that, very touching. And thats one of my favorite songs by Three Days Grace. But I hate everything about you is so much better. I havent read it but will try to watch Heartland just for you Ok. Keep reading and writing!

i liked it. it was very good. hey, i know this is off topic but i was wondering if you could tell me how to post things. i'm new at this web site and need alot of help. i'll understand if don't help me.

aww...poor fang!! love it!! lolz

fang isn't as emotional, it seems OOC for you to make him like that. He loves max, we all know it. But he is too emotional in this piece. tone him down a bit...

good song-amazing song choice. if you throw in a song you don't need to express the character's emotions because the song does it for you.

but it's good, just needs some fine tuning and fixing to get it back in character..
-twilightjunkie1313

Wow. You had Fang's POV really well. Will there be more? Please say yes!

That was really good. Love this so far.

I hope that there is a twist somewhere.

UPDATE SOON!!

Good song story, Poor Fang