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| bookworm45 2008-02-25 ch 7, | abuseI like it. It was an interesting twist, but I like it. Can't wait for more. I'm still a hiphugger, but this is cute. |
| TJ 2008-02-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseWell, I must say that I didn't see that one coming! Wow! That is a story element that isn't often used. So, even though I'm slightly irritated at the turn of events, now I want to see what happens! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-02-18 ch 7, | abusegreat chapter. can't wait to see what will happen next. ^_^ |
| TJ 2008-02-09 ch 6, anon. | abuseThis chapter brought out a whole side of Eric that we would never see on the show, but a side that I think could actually be there. Vulnerability in a character that always seems so resilient is a great added touch. This whole relationship seems like it could actually occur in real life. Some stories just don't portray that, but this one certainly does! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-02-09 ch 6, | abusegreat chapter. i really liked it. can't wait for more. |
| Danny 2008-02-02 ch 5, anon. | abuseI like your story, canon characterization is great. I don't like Shauna, she seems too fake. Keep writing though, I could be wrong about her, D |
| TJ 2008-02-02 ch 5, anon. | abuseI love this story! It's so open and honest, with great characterization. Keep updating, please. :) |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-02-01 ch 5, | abuseawesome chapter. can't wait for the next one. ^_^ |
| Adorelo 2008-01-28 ch 4, | abuseHey there, The story as a whole, I love! Really. I don’t think Eric’s troubles were dealt with as much as they should have been on the show and it’s nice to see more fics out there depicting that time. Normally, people (myself included) merely touch upon it as a dark time, them go on to forget about it as their stories develop onwards. So I’m glad you’re spent more time on it. Now, you asked me to tell you what I thought of Shauna. I immediately liked her. Mainly, I think, because Eric liked her. I don’t know, it was the strange familiarity between the two, the fact they were finishing off each others’ sentences when they had only met a few hours before. I liked it, despite the fact I liked Eric with a certain other woman. I also like the fact she has Delko flustered. Few women can do that to him, and I love it! I think she was concerned, but not overly so, about Eric. At first, I was thinking you were presenting her as one of those obsessive ‘we’ve been on one date I’m in love with you’ people, but after reading on (and hearing that phone message) I like the fact she was worried, but off hand about it. It really worked. Like I said, so far. I like her. She seems nice and I look forward to seeing where you’re taking this). Great job, honey. Jodie |
| Soccer-Bitch 2008-01-26 ch 4, | abusegreat chapter. can't wait for more. |
| csimiamifreako 2007-12-14 ch 1, | abuseCUTE! I LIKE IT, BUT IM NOT A BIG FAN OF OC'S... MOSTLY CUZ MY MOTTOS ARE PRETTY MUCH THE FOLLOWING ERIC+CALLEIGH=AWESOMNESS AND TALLEIGH FOREVER! LOL, BUT UR STORY IS STILL SO GOOD1! |
| spongedork789 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abuseEvery now and then we need a little fluff...this was awesome! Keep up the great work! |
| Soccer-Bitch 2007-09-23 ch 3, | abusecool story so far. i can't wait for the next chapters. ^_^ |
| Krizglass 2007-08-23 ch 3, | abuseOMG! I love your story! Keep writing, you really have talent! |
| randomwriting 2007-08-20 ch 3, | abuseAnd very enjoyable fluff it was. What a sweet date, I enjoyed tagging along with them. You can already tell there's a connection between these two. I liked how she called him out on his smooth moves, 'She laughed again, laying her head in the crook of his neck. “The technique is outdated,” she responded, “but it was executed perfectly.”' It's nice to see Eric, who always comes off as a bit of a ladies man, slightly unsure of himself and eager to please. I especially liked his thinking here, 'I like the sound of that, he thought. It’s like I have a clean slate with her.' His honesty is refreshing. Looking forward to the next update. |