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| Tina-NSfan 2007-06-18 ch 2,  | abuseWait a minute: "Nick forgets of breath for a moment, but Sara gives his life back." Are you freakin' kidding me??!! |
| Tina-NSfan 2007-06-18 ch 1, | abuseHey! Al principio pensé que estaba en la dimensión desconocida, o algo! BOYS AND GIRLS, PALS HAS POSTED IN ENGLISH! yay! Sis, there's some things that I would be glad to tell you later about this fic. How about: write in past tense. .There some verbs that are in 3rd person and it's We... i guess it is: "we belongs" .I just read chapter one, i'm gonna read the rest now. BTW: NOT SNICKERS! =@ just kidding.. loves, Tina. |