Reviews for The Alternate Universe

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Magpie-chan 2008-07-11 ch 10,	abuseAw! Had to reply to this chapter, you've done it so well, i would have failed horribley. Anyway, you should have hadRose fall down the stairs when she's talking to Joan about the dance. Johns reaction would be priceless, he would make such a fuss over her, it would be really cute, And then Joan would get all suspisious and jealous and that would be really good. I wish this episode had happened in series 2 while Rose was there. Ah well, a girl can draem... or read this, both work. Anyway, Update your Alternate series 4 soon, please. ~Magpie~
Reinard Toma 2008-07-09 ch 4,	abusethis is so awesome i love this story ^-^ you rock everything fits so well^-^ You are awesome i love how in character everyone is ^-^
not for lack of trying 2008-07-08 ch 16,	abuseawesome... great work
Suicidal Butterfly 2008-06-09 ch 16,	abuseO!! Cool! Loved it, bit confused by it, but know it's brillant. Meep!
BJ 2008-05-22 ch 16, anon.	abuseYes, yes, yes! It's finally the way it ought to be- completely diffeent, yet the same. Turning Rose into a Time Lord? Wiping out that galactic reset button, "The Year That Never Was"? Brilliant. The first few parts of this left me constantly scratching my head and wondering what was the point of it all... but it's all worked out perfectly. Now I know you have to do "Voyage Of the Damned"... but do we really need another Starship Titanic? Why can't it be the real RMS Titanic? And you don't really have to do all of series 4 if you don't want too... there's a lot of loose ends to wrap up, but since the series 4 arc seems to be Rose Tyler anyway, it might be superfluous to do the whole series. Any chance of Rose staying a Time Lord?
BJ 2008-05-21 ch 12, anon.	abuseYou know something... I take it back. Human Nature right through to Blink, and you've done something different! It almost feels like it took a while, but you hit your stride in the two-parter. (And, could anyone make that clunker "Evolution of the Daleks" good? Naah.)
BJ 2008-05-19 ch 6, anon.	abuseHmm... Okay. What's the point? You're having Rose do the same thing, even say the same things Martha did. Why bother? Rose and Martha are totally different characters despite some common undertones. Sure, both of them are smart, adventurous, and both fell for the Doctor. But if it stopped there, they'd be very, very cardboard characters.
Silver Lizzie 2008-05-16 ch 16,	abuseOk so normally I don't review stories because I suck like that. But I HAD to review this one to tell you how much I loved it and have enjoyed reading it. Everyone was so perfectly in character and the gradual Doctor/Rose romance was done amazingly well (btw jealous/possesive Doctor - totally rocks) and I love the way you twisted things to still involve Martha as I do really like her character. I cannot wait to read Voyage of the Damned and I hope you keep Jack for the most part of the continuing stories coz you know - he's Jack. I really hope you'll consider doing Series 4 I would most certaintly read it :-) well done. Lizzie.
AS-Neon 2008-05-12 ch 16,	abuseI have been reading through this for the last two days, and have to say it is by far the best piece of WHO fanfiction I have ever seen. You’re a talented writer, and obviously someone who really knows the world your playing in. Both the doctor, rose, and jack were all spot on, and as a big fan of the master, i loved any new scenes with him. I am sad to see your not 100% sure your going to continue on with season 4. Whether rose is back or not, it’s not the rose you have left us with here. I hope EXTREMEMLY that you continue on with this story, whether you try and base it around season 4 or not. I would love to see a season 4 with rose and jack being the main companions (please keep jack around by the way, and maybe even a torchwood cast cameo at some point?!) also I am incredibly excited to see how you incorporate a living master into the fold. Whether you do season 4, your own thing, or just a season 4 that turns out incredibly different from the show, I will be happy as long as you continue writing. So thanks a lot for creating this, and I look forward to village of the damned and beyond! -Neon
Talia Taylor 2008-04-17 ch 16,	abuseReally good, I can't wait until Voyage of the damned
Evie13 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseLoved the story. Thought it got a bit tense in the middle chapters, but I liked your own version of the ending. Please continue, maybe you could make up your own mini serires instead of following the series four? Anyway, very, very good!
Lady Clark-Weasley of Books 2008-04-13 ch 16,	abuseI DEMAND YOU UPDATE NOW THIS IS FANTASTIC! and i really need to put this on alert don't i? update soon...or else...
gladdecease 2008-04-13 ch 16,	abuseHaha, I was ridiculously pleased to see this! I'm glad you've decided to continue it (though I wonder how you'll work around That Moment in Partners in Crime). I like what you did with Time Crash. It was, of course, a very Doctor-focused scene, and I can only imagine how difficult it was to fit Jack and Rose into it. Though I've got to say, I love how the Doctor ends up pushing things off he doesn't want to talk about. Though Rose is too smart to let him do that for long, I should think! Voyage of the Damned is going to be very interesting with this trio there. I can see Jack now, invoking every tradition he can think of. Haha, I can hardly wait! Thanks for writing.
Isis the Sphinx 2008-04-13 ch 16,	abuseVery, very nice. Extremely funy. But just wait until things come crashing down for Rose. Not good. Keep writing!
Gilari 2008-04-12 ch 16,	abuseYay, Time Crash! I'm so glad you decided to continue with the fic, it's such a pleasure to read. I loved how you dealt with the two Doctors, and I'm glad Jack is along for the ride (gotta love Jack!) When is the Doctor going to tell Rose what she is? Poor girl thinks she's a Time Lady. Although, if she stays like that, the Doctor's not alone any more. More please!

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