This is a really good story. Just wondered if you were still working on it. Enjoy your writing, keep up the good work.

You need to finish this story! I've been waiting for like forever!

Love this Story. It is so well Written and the characters and plot are great. I hope you update really soon as i Cant Wait to read more. Update on a regular basis and ill Keep Reading. Great story that is really well written with a great original character that i cant wait to read more on what happens with her and shawn

Awesome chapter, I can't wait to read more. Please please please update soon. Please?

Dani

cool.

I'd love to know when you start HP.
I even added you to my author alert list!
I read HP & LOTR also.

happy writing!
mk

Hi, I suggest to you that you revise this story so you have more directions to go it, you've kinda boxed yourself into a corner or continue on with how you've got it and add in another complication, like Shawn being able to go back to work so its career vs family, or something... hope this helps!

Added the new Pen name just incase :)

good to know you are still around. I look forward to reading your con't chapters whenever you get to them.

now, i think I better go check out your other stories, and see if I've read them already...

please update when you have the chance!

i want her bro. and friend to get nailed big time,
and, of course, for the happily ever after.

i luv this story update soon

hey! found your story after just about giving up on WWE fic because all the writers seem to want to be divas doing swantons and get their choosen wrestler.

i like the story.
i like the integrity of your characters.
boy, ya hardly ever read about someone actually going to church!
it's pretty amazing.
i want to read more!

as far as writer's block, in my experience you just have to force your way thru it.

where do you go from here?
just a few brainstorming thoughts, if you don't mind...

is the danger to the family gone?
if not, how will it manifest itself?

what are the legal consequences for shawn, if any?

is her back going to be okay?
will she need surgery?
who might sneak in to try and mess everything up in the hospital?
i know these guys aren't brain surgeons, but a needle full of air in an IV is deadly.

or what if her surgery isn't successful and she thinks she's permanently disabled and pushes everyone away -- not wanting to be a burden. But, if that were the case, she would become a target again too.

Somehow I think mike and steve are too stupid to give up.

oh, just a passing medical thought. I really don't think they would have released her from the hospita., if she was so bad off and hardly awake. You're a bit off medically about concussions, but that's fixable, if you chose to fix it. there's a cool medical site if you are ever interested. I read emergency fanfic and if you google that, somewhere down the line there is a medical site or two that can help w/ the details.

let's see...
what else could create angst in this story?
what could possibly damage their relationship, after all it seems to be going so well...
if vince calls him back to WWE, who might tempt him into sin, or appear to do so, because they just might hate his new wife?

would she and rach go on the road w/ him?

what diva ** might see her and shawn as fair game?

broken trust is very hard to heal, and where would she have to turn if her heart was broken?
and could he forgive her for not trusting him enough? that could be a really big arguement, and if rachael got in the middle of it, they would stop for her benefit, but it would still fester.

and how are shawn and rachael going to grow together. I can see it some, but you made a real point of him not being able to stand being w/ her very much.

And then there is always the book deal...
What dark think from shawn's not so pure past might come up and bite the family in the butt??

unless you are ready to "happily ever after" them, you do have some story places you could still go.

sorry to be so long winded. i'm fine w/ ideas and eventhough I have been writing for years, I am still struggling to get a fanfic story to completion.

so, my friend, write on!!
mk

ps- hope that might help a bit w/ your writer's block. If not, just ignore it all. It's all good.

Oh My I hope you figure out where to go with this one as I am seriously loving it!

good chapters, although you might want to think about giving them some time out from the bad guys.

man i hate her brother! please update soon.

wow...i really really like this story!

update son

xx