Great story so far looking forward to the next chapter and also make Isaribi tag along for the mission.

This may seem overly hostile, but with all the fanfic I've read, I have an obscene amount of hatred for Sarutobi. Such ... words can't describe that piece of human excrement.

Nice job. I really like how you have Naruto & Isaribi interact. I hope to see more of it there a good but sadly underwritten ship.

Wo! Keep it up!

awesome story so far,im so glad you decided to come back and start posting again.i cannot wait untill the next chapter comes out.

add more chapter really good.

dude,u got it wrong, Yamato is the codename given by tsunade when they left on mission, his true name is Tenzo

Nice, but a few problems. First being only the leaders of the five great Shinobi nations are called Kage's so there's no way the leader of Whirlpool could be called Uzukage. Orochimaru calls himself the Otokage out of pure cockiness.

Second you went straight to calling the Kumo nin by there names. When you never revealed their names, you should have described their looks and let themselves introduce each others names in conversation.

Anyways good chapter, I wonder though why Jiraiya didn't lay the smack down on Sarutobi's incredibly faulty logic. Have their own Jinchuuriki there to respond to the threat? Naruto despite how strong you have him could never hope to stand up to a Kage level Jinchuuriki let alone two other adult ones. Just because he's a Jinchuuriki doesn't mean he's fit to take on others, when there are normal ninja far stronger than him. It just seems your making Sarutobi really dumb, if you have a confrontation between Jiraiya and him again I'd hope for Sarutobi to say he's giving in to a council of some sort or some reason other than him being stupid.

Anyways sorry if I came off flamish, I enjoy the story and this chapter while slightly off was good.

nice!

you fic is very nice, congratulations, but you have made 2 major mistakes, i don t tell to critic, but to let you correct it if you want.

1. it's not called Hyuge clan, it's Hyuga clan, at the beggining of your fic I wasn't event sure if you were talking about that clan or not, but once you wrote about the byakugan, I understood.

2. The third guy in the team with Naruto and Isabiri, it says he can do ice jutsu. But ice jutsu is a bloodline limit that is considered extinct, and it's not from konoha but from mist. If that character possess the hyouton bloodline ( ice bloodline ), you should explain how he got it, the way he is introduced in the story, his ice jutsu seems a normal occurence, when in fact it's a big deal, almost as big as naruto and isabiri bloodline

Nice chapter kinda short but still not much happened. I hope you update again soon.

great

another fantastic chapter thank you for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a.

Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading what happens next in your fic.

Awsome. you know what i realy realy want?You know how Naruto keeps on using up his swords? Let him get Samehada! Its transformation ability will be awsome combined with naruto's chakra! (Btw, Samehada wants to be wielded by the person with the most chakra, thats why it chose killer bee!