Reviews for Life Renewed, Love Renewed

Reviews For: Life Renewed, Love Renewed

Shineko 2008-01-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice chapter and I'll be looking up for the next one too! Thanky you!
Ardwynna Morrigu 2008-01-30 ch 5,	abusePoor dears. How deep do those marks go? In Aeris' case, a little cocoa butter, Vitamin E and a lot of patience might help. Seph, well, he just took his first step forward. Good for him. I could feel the poor boy ready to snap, not in the full crazy way but just give in to sheer distress. That couldn't have been an easy sight. sigh And they STILL can't manage a proper first date. How in the world did they pull it together long enough to have Keter?
1wngdngl 2008-01-30 ch 5,	abuseYou know, I think Seph here is acting way more violently than his character would allow. I mean, I know he has bad experiences with doctors in the past, but that was a long time ago. He's not /stupid/, he knows that she's there to be treated. Likely, the first thing he would do would be to ask /why/ they're doing this in the first place. And besides, why would the doctors perform the procedure while her parents are /right/ there, and can hear and see everything? The scene feels a bit contrived to me.
Ardwynna Morrigu 2008-01-14 ch 4,	abuseThey haven't even had a first official date yet and Aeris is already turning into the kind of girlfriend who has her man's nuts in the palm of her hand. Not that Seph seems to mind. She's a little menace to society in that chair. I love how spunky she is after everything she's been through. :D
Shineko 2008-01-14 ch 4, anon.	abuseThanks! I can't wait to see more!
chaotic pink chocobo 2008-01-13 ch 4,	abuseThat's a pick-me-upper chapter for sure! XD nice job!
Ardwynna Morrigu 2007-10-17 ch 3,	abuseCan't believe I left this thing alone so long. This chapter was adorable! All that awkwardness and parental worry! Watching Seph get the Father talk was priceless! Oh, the poor guy. I sympathize, but it's damned funny too. Much props for Aeris being a little tease. Gonna turn her parents' hair grey early, that girl.
chaotic pink chocobo 2007-08-19 ch 3,	abuseXD loved it!
Ardwynna Morrigu 2007-07-06 ch 2,	abuseThis is one exciting crossover that is not a crossover. Just playing with the Final Fantasy elements, beautiful. Love how Seph was drowning his sorrows in growliness and hard labor, AND being a hot stud doing it. There are so many little things in this chapter that I like: The little 'kupo' in the moogle's speech just struck me as adorable, even though it's a common thing for them; Seph 'negotiating' for Aeris' health; Aeris' first look at a bangaa, they are decent shock to the system, actually working that annoying astrological sign error into the story. Yeah, Aeris is going to be fine, alright. =3 This is a fun read.
Ardwynna Morrigu 2007-06-18 ch 1,	abuseInteresting and satisfying little nugget to fill the gaps. I had wondered exactly how things managed to work out for them. Seph finally collapsing was a nice touch, as was the Ivalice-type setting. I kind of want to see what Aeris' reaction to the Viera will be. A job for Seph, though, that sounds interesting.

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