^.^ This couple will never get old. I love KBOW! Excellent story.. I love the descriptions and the plot. Your diction is great, too. Keep writing!
~Cherriey

I definitely don't think it was racy. There's definitely much racier. Very cute fic. Loved the part where Oliver and Katie talk about how they only wanted each other. Golden.

Racy? A little
Good? Yes!
Great work with this one.

You're the best. Honestly.

I don't even know what to say (You got it: I'm crying). Do you know that this is the ONLY bday present I've got? Not even my PARENTS bothered... And I'm 16 and I want my drivers license!

Bout the fic... I SO LOVE IT... A million thanks. You have no idea how much I liked it. A bit racy, just a bit, but still perfect: I can understand Katie's desperation.

Lots of love,

Kayi.

I meant to review this once I got it in my inbox, but I got lazy and procrastinated on reviewing this earlier :)

Okay...Katie, as always, is teh greatness! She's lucky, she gets a cool job, lol.

Ginny, Hermione, Ron and Harry get a short cameo, horay. It's always interesting to see a mainly KBOW/AJFW/ASGW writer include the actual Golden Trio.

I normally stay away from stories that contain coarse language, implied sex scenes (or sex at all!) and shirtless/pantless characters, but since you rule so hard, I'll stick around.

Hm...no memorable quotes. Odd...

I think you've found a niche market with the OWxKB raciness - there's not a lot out there!

Oh and may I just add that this was extra-ordinarily fabulously amazing! I really thought that it was going to be a sad ending - I get quite worried when you put it in the Angst genre you see.

Congratulations on yet another wonderful piece of work xx

OMG THATS WHAT I FORGOT LAST TIME! omg, how did i forget that? i figured it was yours and tried to remembered but obviously i didnt.

racy darling? was that the word you used? hun, it wasnt that bad. gods youre so innocent sometimes...ahahahaha, total jk. total. but omg i loved this whole thing. the whole fing thing. so there. now you have to deal with my love al over again.

wow, i am totally not making snse at ALL today. i had a state exam and i swear my minds been fried ever since. and i have another one tomorrow. YAY!

lots o love!

ahahahaha, almost forgot to review for this one. i had clicked the next chap button and did an oh shit move. and of course i had to come back and tell you how freakingly unbelievable you are at writing. but i figure you know that already hu?


ah, love kates. love how she spilt the drink on him. so proud of her. and fucking oliver. yeah,i said it. his whole bit at the beginning was a tad ridiculous. i was like psh, liar. or something along those lines. men...


hahaha, next chap where i hope to find his clothes discarded...;}

lots o love!

and ps. def faves

so im going to be the GOOD person here-the GOOD reader-the GOOD reviewer and review to EVERY FLIPPING FABULOUS CHAPTER YOU TURN OUT. so there. now to the good stuff.

omg you made me squeal in like the first sentence. "a shirtless, soon to be pants-less Oliver Wood."
~that right there...was glorious. completely, utterly and undeniably glorious. ill say it again...glorious.

and that was only the begginning my lovely ash cause we all know what a terriffic writer you are. shall i make a list? i think i shall. and it shall be in order.

1. just the word 'fred' makes my life. you know that and im so glad you put him in right at the beginning. but yeah. and cause i dont know whether to make this another number and whether or not to make it one or two if it does qualify so ill tack it on here. LOVE the description. cause its there but not like ALL there. you know? i know you know cause youre used to my cryptic ways. hahahaha, gods i sound so ridiculously insane. and im also hearing a touch of an english accent coming on...hahahaha.

2. LOVE her job. you soo would get her into the writing business even if she wasnt the writer. and i might have to steal that from you. not an agent perhaps, but i can so see her as a book-y type of person. totally love it.

3."There was a ridiculously loud silence" that is SO paradoxial it makes my day SO much. like i laughed out loud for a solid 12.6 seconds after reading that. and it creeps up on you too. at first it seems like it's a perfectly normal sentence and then youre just like waitt...and that, as well though not as much as the oliver bit, is glorious.

4. katies denial is such a move i would pull. stumbling, over exagerrating. its such a me move its fantastic. hahahaha


well, that covers this chap i think. on to the next one.
lots o love!

This was so cute! I could really relate to how Katie felt and you did such a good job making her react reasonably, she wasn't overdramatic at all.

this fic was utterly adorable
Their relationship was...real and understandable.
Youre an amazing writer :-)
Keep it up!!

wow! nice story! Its been a while since i read one of yours, but u still got it!

ha! well, glad they talked about it and now going at it like rabbits :P

they have each other now ;sighes deeply; ;melted grin plastered all over face;

great job with this trilogy :D ;worships you;

Tal

okay. not entirely his fault... guess I won't kick him where it hurts? where it least hurts?
I think Kates should solve a few things with herself first.

going on the third now. great job so far :P (hardly a surprise;)

Tal

aha... there's nothing better than just finishing a literature hard arse exam and read a little KBOW :)

I feel sorry for Kates, it appears the scottich bastard (aka oliver) broke her heart or something. Someone should kick him. Where it hurts!

now, off to the second chapter ;)

Tal