A great story. Very good.

hey hey!
That was great!
I really really enjoyed reading that.
Skipped a lot, but i guess otherwise it would have been a mile long.
Anyway, really great.
Keep it up!
XOXOXO

YAY! nice ending... LOVED IT!
but i always thought that Liz was sorry for kissing him? Oh well, i loved this version too! ;D

Oh, that's so good!
Jack is really in character (which is a hard thing to do, given his generally drunken state)
Brilliant!

I'd call this an entirely feasible account of what Liz went through in the aftermath of DMC.
It's nice to know there are better times ahead for her.

Wow that was really good! I enjoyed reading it. Especially the little part you added at the end.

If that was a real scene in the movie it would've happened word for word.

Great job!