Incredible good story! Keep writing, i love this story:)!

"Where's your messiah now!"

LOL!

This fanfic is awesome. A-W-E-S-O-M-E. Keep writing, this fanfic has excellent potential.

Wow, this was amazing. Kudos onthe awesome righting. The corruption taht killed them rings a bit like a scene from the canterbury tales, that the Pardoner told. True then and true still how much lust corrupts. The love of money IS the root of evil, eh? True enough.

Heh heh. I've read your stories on , an' i'm glad you decided to post 'em here.

Wow. You certainly have a way of coming up with some emotionally disturbing stuff. Caleb's devotion to Sophia in "I Live Again" really turned my head, made me wonder if I would ever be so devoted to someone that I would stay with them even through all of that weird , and now Richard and co.'s corruption by The Chosen. Would I be so easily impressionable in that circumstance? I hope I never have to find out! Top notch work, yet again Eric.