 LostVampireChild 2008-01-27 . chapter 4this is a very good story! |
 JackSparrowsLATINABonnieLass 2008-01-15 . chapter 4Oh my g :O
Great story! Really...
i so totally Envy Becky XD
lol
but plz updated soon!!
:D
-SAL4LIFE |
 Depperanium 2007-12-16 . chapter 4aw that was SO sweet! I was just going "aw" the whole time I was reading it it was so CUTE! I think youve captured Johnnys personality perfectly I reckon he really would be that sweet and nervous like that. Adorable chapter! :)
Cant wait to read more! |
 Depperanium 2007-12-16 . chapter 2pleeaase update this story soon ive read it countless times now lol! Its so awesome and I really want to see the next bit! Be a diamond and update...PWEAASSE! :) |
 sparrowsxxswann 2007-10-26 . chapter 3UPDATE WE WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN HOTEL ROOM! please im waiting rather impatiently now please update x |
 Depperanium 2007-09-14 . chapter 3ive read this story twice now...its really good..please update! |
 sparrowsxxswann 2007-07-31 . chapter 1please write more x i read this ages ago n i wanna know what happens to becky and Johnny. really good so far xx |