it is really short, but kinda sweet :)
- T

It's really good, but could you add something from Kitty's POV? It seems kinda incomplete. BTW, I've finally gotten an acount on FF, but it won't let me upload stories! I'm still trying, and I've checked everything, so don't look for any stories on my FF acount!lol.

Good Luck Writing!
-computerzandbks4ever

Sweet...,
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This is actually really nice :] Maybe you could post more, where Nathaniel and Ptolemy are having a conversation about stuff...*cough* Barti *cough* It could turn into something really awesome :D

good story i guess...
I juss got dunn readin the trilogy so im kinda juss lookin around readin stuff abot it...

It could be longer you know? :-)

You should on One-shotify this and make it a full fledged chapter laden story.

This was pretty good, even though it was really short. It was not boring at all, and I'd like to see more to it. Keep up the good work! ;)

Even though it was short, I still liked it. You're a good writer.