Idk wat to say...brava! or watever a foreign man says, loved it bout had me in tears at the ending.Although I'm glad to see atleast a happy ending after a tragic loss.
So reading CoTH.

This story was absolutely the best story I haven ever read! I have read every story in this section. Not my own of course. This takes the highest honor I can give as Anotoki! The Emblem of wesomeness Rivaling Rice a.k.a. The EARR!

great story :) read this a while ago and just came back to re-read...you know there aren't enough forsaken love stories. And you can have such fun with the angsty side of forsaken romance! Beats me why there aren't more fan fics involving them. Anyway, love your characters. Keep up the awesome work ^^

Oh me like!
Very well written, never thought I'd read a human/forsaken story Oo and actually like it ;)
And ofc I appreciate all opportunities to be a wow-geek :)

This story is great. I loved the plot and it's very well written. I had hoped Kalya and Saran would be together, but it pleased me the way you ended it despite what I wished to happen. I am not usually happy with the way a story ends if it's not what I wanted but you ended it so well I couldn't not enjoy it. I really liked Saran's outlook at the end even though his beloved had died. It was very sweet. You are very talented. :)

I'm to lazy to log in, but I thought I'd leave a review. I've only read the first chapter, but I love it so far! I'll be back for more, then maybe I'll log in and favorite this story. ;D

Simply an awesome story. I will definitely read Child of the Horde after this!^^

Probably not much I can say that the other reviews already have. Simply remarkable! Keep it up!

It was so beautiful... I really didn't want Kalya to die, but somehow I felt that she never would, that you would let her. I was wrong, but the story was still wonderful.

Wow. That was a really great story. I was really sad when Kalya died, but I'm glad Saran is happy now. That was an awsome story, I hope to be reading more stories from you! ^.^

This is truly one of this kick-** stories i'm longing for to read.
You made me feel every ounce of emotion your characters have had.

Very good, very good. Always nice to see someone be a prick to Sylvanus.
Very descriptive, very emotional story on the whole, with a very unique writing style that takes it not too slow nor too fast (which is the trouble I generally have in my writings). The only real flaw I saw was just a matter of preferance, that being the lack of reality of bonds between men.
We make more crude put-downs and inappropriate sex jokes, and never talk about our feelings. =3
Anyway, good overall. Slightly alienating to certain male audiences such as myself, but once they read the first two or so chapters, it ends up not really mattering. Gj

Great ending even though it was a sad one. but like you said not every story can have a happy ending. Great work and I will be starting to read your other story now.

*sniffles* :( That was so sad! >.

you are really cruel to kill her , poor saran (hek even I cried a litle , cuz it was so well writen , with so much feeling in it)
but your statment that there can´t always be happy andings is right

What can I say but WoW what a great story and I cna not wiat till there is more. So keep it up and update soon please.