Love it!!

great chap
hope sawyer will be alright soon
update!!

:O definitely wasn't expecting that! but it was a great chapter, i was sitting on the edge of my chair so tense.
please update soon, i hope he doesn't die!
bonboni
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YES! You updated! I'm so happy! but i'm still left hanging!! Hibbs is an evil, evil, evil, evil, man. He need to lighten up a bit. What does he think Kate can do? Why did he have to kidnap her? Does he know about her? Wha! I'm hooked on this story just like Lost! you better update quicker than there starting the show up again though. I can't believe it's not on until Feb!

Good chapter!

Ooh, very very good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens!

! What happened?! Did Hibbs know that Kate would be there and follow him out? Did he have someone waiting for Her. ! This is taken on a new level of exitmeant and I can't wait to find the answers. :)

:O omg! now kate's fallen unconscious! and yes, she is his friend! grr, i hate hibbs. anyway, please update soon i need to know what will happen next! :P
bonboni
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Ok, I just have to say this -

"The two men were staring each other down, if looks could kill the only thing left of both of them would be a burning gory mess on the floor." - ROFL! I know I'm not supposed to laugh at that...but it just struck me as funny! lol I'm not incredibly sadistic but...it was just funny!

"Before she knew what happened Kate felt a blinding pain in the back of her head. She felt herself falling towards the ground and everything went black. She didn't even know what had hit her." - OH NO! I have a feeling that Kate wouldn't been a bit more careful than that, seeing as she knows how to handle criminals, being one herself...yet at the same time, it was in character too. :) Aww, she cares about him!

What's he going to do to her? Hold her ransom? Maybe try to get his money's worth from her? *gulp* That would be horrible for her, and he'd probably doubt she was worth 500 grand anyway. Take her up on her offer and have her help him get the money? Those last two together?

I can't wait for more! Please update soon. Like today! lol

Oh no! poor Sawyer. Should of had his seatbelt on. Is Jack going to come into the story? I really like your writting and this plot. :-)

OMG! hibbs came to visit him at the hospital?! i really hope he's not gonna strangle sawyer or something, you know what they guy's like.
that was a very big surprise indeed. and it was definitely worth the wait. update soon!
bonboni
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Thanks for the update. Wow, I wonder what Hibbs is going to do. Please please update soon and try make the chapters a bit longer!

Ooh, is Hibbs coming in to threaten him? Finish the job? demand more money? This is so exciting, Angi! I can't believe how well you are keeping me on the edge of my seat, and despite the short chaps, how interested I am. I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Kate interfere? Will he have the money?

Update soon!

interesting, very interesting. i really like the tension of this, it's amazing how well it can be written! keep going, i want to see more chapters, it's getting really exciting.
bonboni
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Aww, Kate felt so helpless and worried abotu Sawyer, she needed comfort. I assume that Jack is messed up somehow, like in the FF's? Anyway, great chap! Sawyer sounds really bad, I hope that he's alright! And what will happen with Kate and the money? Will Hibbs pay Kate a visit or what?

Update!

no! they are gonna be okay, right? poor sawyer. he's basically on the verge of dying! and kate is so worried but she shouldn't be, they'll be okay yeah? they better be! :D
lovin' the new chapters and i think you should definitely write more!
bonboni
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