lol, not necessarily a fan of this couple, I've never really considered it all too much, but this is very good XD

So short, but so brilliant. Perfect harmony, wonderful shape, such a clear image. This subtle body language speaks more than anything; 10/10 for Itachi, and for Ino as well. A little gem - and I love finding them. Thank you.

very bittersweet and beautiful! I love it!

Nice,so lemme get this staright.She's in a bed with Itachi and Sasuke?What a lucky girl...lol ^^

Wow, short yet still powerful. I like how you portrayed Ino and Itachi, though he was asleep. And since he was asleep he could not be OOC which is wonderful.

the last line killed me with its freakin' awesomeness. wow, for real, you captured some kind of emotion here; freakily accurate; it was like time had stopped, frozen in place just for her, and all her inner thoughts just captivate. it's so ino but at the same time, you get this feeling of unfamiliarity ('who is this person?'), because the thoughts show so much depth (despite their misleading superficial surface - hah, alliteration baby!). and we can't say ino is always portrayed with so much [meaning] and [substance] - tho' she should be, dammit. but i digress.

it was a strange, creepy kind of beautiful. much love.

Beautiful. Just perfect. Itachi's asleep next to her, so thankfully he can't be OOC (I can't even count how many stories I've seen where he's gentle, kind and loving - wtf?!) Anyway. I also love Ino's thoughts and the whole...scenery. "Lost in time with his perfect heartbeat" - genius.

This was just so gorgeous. You did a wonderful job!

Nice story. A bit confusing but pretty.

loved it, it was really good.

I like it. Very well-written.
lol

please update. i love it!

That was good and weird at the same time. You should do more like that.