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badkidoh
2008-07-10
ch 7,
abusei like it up till chapter 6, then chapter 7 got a little strange.
Ryika-sama
2008-02-28
ch 2,
abuseLOL! Great second chapter! Loved the bit about, "...need to get that old stick outta my butt."
Ryika-sama
2008-02-28
ch 1,
abuseLoved it! I'm going to read the next chapter now because, as I read this first one, the corners of my mouth were twitching. I knew that there was a laugh in there somewhere. Very amusing, thanks!
maddikinz940
2008-01-12
ch 6,
abuseLOL this is really funny. I love it. UPDATE SOON!
MrsBigTuna
2007-11-03
ch 6,
abuseLove the story. I love Maeby and George Michael. Keep it up. and Update soon. You're killing here!
HifaLootin
2007-10-23
ch 6,
abuseI like this a lot--all the characters seem really true to their on-screen selves and you've got a great balance of humor and drama :D Now I'm anxious for that Bratz buying scene...
Blue's Dreamer
2007-10-21
ch 6,
abusePlease don't kill me for forgetting to review. Okay, you're not killing me . . . and ONTO THE REVIEW:

Lindsay was following, yelling, “Michael! Why won’t you love me?! Why won’t you tell me I’m pretty anymore?!”

“Um, maybe because you’re crazy and my son is dating your daughter?” - xD Even thought that wasn't MEANT to be funny, I still thought it was hilarious.

As always, hysterical chapter but I know NEXT CHAPTER WHEN YOU WRITE GOB AND TOBIAS AT THE MALL AHEM AHEM I'll be laughing so hard I'll probably fall out of my chair and hit my head on the desk.
vindictive-much
2007-10-08
ch 6,
abuseI'm kind of scared of what the Bratz thing is. lol. Thank God Michael rejected Lindsay. I was worried about where that was going for a minutes (shudders at the thought). The situation with George Michael and Maebey is really getting interesting, so I can't wait to see where that goes. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
Blue's Dreamer
2007-08-16
ch 5,
abuse"But Maeby was much more important to him than Yam, because Maeby was family, and family is always first."

But I thought breakfast always came first!

“Although that one over there is a very, very nice piece of plastic.” He turned to GOB. “Would you like to accompany me to the mall to buy one?”

HUNGOVER GOB AT THE MALL. Sorry. Had to scream that.
Ikumak
2007-08-15
ch 5,
abuseAww poor Michael. So much stress, so much... Bluth in his vains XD Wow, GOB and Tobis buying Bratz XD this is going to be great. Keep up the great work!
vindictive-much
2007-08-15
ch 5,
abuselol. Tobias and Gob are probably going to get some weird looks at the mall. Man, Michael can be such a jerk.
Blue's Dreamer
2007-07-12
ch 4,
abuseChary, dahling. You crack me up. This is so funny!

"He’d also forgotten to put on a clean pair of underwear, but what went on down there was between George-Michael and George-Michael only."

You're a hoot.
Ikumak
2007-07-08
ch 4,
abuseRofl! I /love/ GOB's last line XD it litterally made me lol. And aww the George Michal and Maeby moment(s) were so darn cute. Hmm I'm itching to find out what Michael is up to. Keep up the great work!
vindictive-much
2007-07-08
ch 4,
abuseAlright! Another awesome chapter! Heheh, what Gob said to Michael before he left was priceless! Keep up the good work. ;)
Blue's Dreamer
2007-07-03
ch 3,
abuse“My son’s name is George-Michael! It’s George-Michael, Mom!” Michael the lonely ghost called from where he was hanging around in the back of the room.

HA! You crack me up Chary, you really do. And if I could write half as humorously (I CAN'T SPELL ANYMORE!) as you can, NaCoSA would be so much better. And I will get around to updating that eventually . . . anyway, I really like it!
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