this is great story..please finish it..i've been waiting for 2years for it..please

ARGH! I just found this story & I am hooked! It says 2 more chapters to go...and then... NOTHING! What happened to the rest of the story?

Wow this is really good cant wait for the next chapter!

This is great - please UD soon :-)

Oh, that's so not fair. I thought this story was finished when I started reading it! Plus update this so we can find out what happens to Grissom and Sara...

I hope this motivates you to continue to write this story and finish it, it's really good.

think of this review as a motivation tool...please finish this story...:) chauncey

Only two more? Eek, what's going to happen? I really hate that DeSoto guy. He's evil.

This story is awesome. Can't wait to see what happens next. I like how you got both sara and Grissom stuck in that water. Heh, heh, very clever...

Please update soon!

great chapter!!

Oh, wow! I just found this story and it's terrific! Can't wait for the next installment!

A shovel?What the heck for?

So it was for body heat.

Very good chapter. The meeting between Brass and Desoto had me sitting on the edge of my seat. I liked the was you wrote Brass. I could hear his voice in my head as I read. Way to go Warrick... I could see him saying it. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. anne

Good chapters though I'm still concerned that you jump from place to place without breaking your chapter up. It's very difficult to follow, you have to readjust your mind as opposed to being prepared for the shift by some sort of signal.

Otherwise, very much enjoyed. Brass seems very in character, not sure about Grissom yet but Sara seems to be pretty good to.