You truly captured the Maraurders, and this made me this close to crying. It's just sad. It really is. I was searching for Maraurder ones, but this is better than I could've imagined.
This part is just perfect:

And then, one fall night, everything changed. One friend betrayed another, and for all intents and purposes all four died that night. Only one was buried; one was honored a false hero and the third wrongly convicted a heartless murderer. And the fourth; he lived on, physically untouched by that night, waking up every morning to a world he no longer wanted a part of.
Everyone said they were indestructible, but sometimes even the strongest break.


It is really very good. I chose a certain song when I read one-shots, and for this one "How Did This Happen to Me?" fits this perfectly.

its kinda of funny but i like it

Loved it. "the cocky athlete, the entertaining charmer, the studious sweetheart, the quiet observer—but you found that they seemed to make their differences work."
Perfect.
I hate it when people just paint peter as a trailing, pathetic wimp. Sirius explicitly states in POA that they would have died for Peter. They are so brilliant aren't they, yet so tragic. The Marauders. Ah. You have to love them.

Great fic! I know I write that in every review to all of your stories, but it it, they all are!! I mean - I think you really described their relationship very good

Keep writing :D

“Ah. Those fireworks were surprisingly affective.”

“Who would have thought soup could fly quite that high?”

“Ah, not I, my friend. Not even I.”

haha! it was funny! erm, till the end. then it wasnt so funny. yeah. but it was still good!


bub'les

Oh that was absolutely beautiful! Beautifully done! I love how you suggested that in some way they ALL died that night. Fantastic job! Absolutely fantastic! Bravo!

=O So Amazing...made me want to laugh...and made me want to cry... Fantastic story though =3

Such a fun story with such a sad ending, absolutely lovely!

every time i read one of your stories, i sit in shock afterwards. you are such an amzing writer. your oneshots are all so astounding. i love them!
Raining In The Midst Of Tears,
Rsoemary Emerson

WOW! again! This is my favorite favorite out of the three I've just read... :) Great job. Love your writing style; though I've said it already before. Favorites list!again!lol

That was so good!! :D I really liked it!

This is really good. i like how it's serious and funny in equal parts. it draw a really good picture of their friendship.

:O I LOVE IT! it's amazing! i actually love this story. it's amazing.
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have i said it's amazing yet? lol. :P