OHMAGAWD!! I love it its really good! It sounds so pretty and i think its soo true! Thanks for another great addition to my faves!

my god, I love taang. quite possibly the best taangy poem I've read.

AW! I think that was very unique...

Ya know, it's not that bad for something that's 'hot off the press.' (and here is the part where I feel inclined to quote FFN's Guidelines. Uh...) Some punctuation would be nice, though, and the fourth stanza doesn't rhyme.

Actually, a pretty good poem. Thumbs up! :D
-Fanficcer

Hi, on the off chance that u ever see this! *sniff, sniff* It made me want to cry. I considered going on your file and on you page putting more about me. But u were spared (today!). Oh, and on the quotes you put the one about suburbs TWICE! Shame shame. Oh and if u haven't figured it out yet it is RYANE! I know, you're favorite person in the WHOLE WIDE WORLD! Email me when (...if) u get this WONDERFUL review (which had almost nothing to do with the poem!

That was so good and so sweet. Good job! It's going to my favs!!