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| Ms.Roboto 2008-09-05 ch 1,  | abusethere's a lot of grammatical errors, but other than that, it was really good. i can't wait to read more! ;) |
| rintisku 2008-09-02 ch 2, | abusei totally loved i have not read much of the book but i love this fic it is awsome to me yaoi is great so i hope there will be a sequal.. |
| xoiheartjasper 2008-08-16 ch 2, anon. | abuseomc!! this is amazing!! please write another chapter!! your story doesn't need flames it's hot already!! it's fantastic!! |
| DemonicStrawberry 2008-08-07 ch 2, | abuseWhy did you make Jacob the uke? when Jacob is about 2 times bigger than Edward and definitely more manly... I mean it was still good... but come on I can hardly imagine this little man over a bigger man while the bigger one is actually receiving... |
| VairyTay 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseI just had to coment on that 'cuz it was frikkin funny. You rock standing up for yourself like that, seriously. I too am tired of people that search for slash just so they can flame it all for fun. Sheesh. |
| EdgeofDarkness 2008-06-28 ch 2, | abusem...yummy yaoi... aside from a few grammaticl/spelling errors, this was a rather nice(hot, lol) peice. Too short for my taste...but then againm the good ones always are... |
| Harakiri Megami-SasuNaru Lo... 2008-06-20 ch 2, | abuseaw so cute^^ |
| reallyfunnyusername 2008-05-26 ch 2, | abusethat was...special! XD but, no, really, it was good! i'm not really the girl who likes reading about this kinda stuff, but this was actually good! XD not many people can do a good job writing this kind of stuff :P and i loved your warnings, they were funny XD |
| Gaaragirl2020 2008-05-25 ch 2, | abusehot 0.0 loved it!~ |
| Gaaragirl2020 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI love yaoi! and I love EdwardxJacob!~ XD |
| ArgentLuvzCaffeine 2008-05-17 ch 2, | abuseGreat lemon! You write well. |
| slashgurl 2008-05-12 ch 2, anon. | abusei loved this you are great and don't deserve to be critisized. |
| seximonki 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuselol, love the rant |
| VampsRawkWerewolves 2008-04-30 ch 2, | abuseeww ._. I prefer Eddy as a heterosexual vampire.. o-o but ugh, another comment from another girl: is not bad, but you can do a better job with the story and not only in the lemon |
| Maiko-Akatsuki-Ninja 2008-04-24 ch 2, | abuseAll I can say is... THAT WAS ** HOT! |