For some reason, when I liked on this story, I wasn't expecting this. I really like it. The idea of Dom being horrified by the idea of killing is something that isn't completely explored, but I think it should be. I think that most people would be horrified by the idea of taking a life. The Kel/Dom fluff with cute but not unrealistic. I don't normally ship them, but this convinced me that it can be done correctly. Good job.

AW! That was so sweet! Loved it!

Cute:)

Good job!

So sweet! I love the idea, the snapshots thing, and I think it was splendidly written! Hooray!

That's beautiful. No other way to say it. The way you wrote this makes me think that you'd make a fine poem writer, bless us with a couple of those soon please, that is of course if you want to.

Keep writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

amazing!

:-) That was really good! I am adding this story to my favorites!

Aww, this was sweet. I'm usually not a Dom/Kel fan, but this was definitely cute. It is interesting to give Dom more personality and history than Tammy did. Good work!

Wow; that's beautiful. I'm not sure I would ever describe Kel as 'demure', though.

didn't you post this ages ago? why are you reposting?

very good, btw

Ooh.. the greatness

*crys*

*sniff sniff*

that...was so beautiful

sad cute happy...all in one

o...thats so cute!...I loved it!...short, sweet, and to the point...lol...I am so faving this one!

Aww. That was adorable.

Keep writing

so sweet, tons o'fluff