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| Space1Traveler 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseVery nice! Love that Brendan and Freya. Poor Brendan whumped as usual but all better now. Good Freya, true friend to the end. Thanks for sharing. |
| godsdaughter77 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely loved this story! There are so many things in it that I really liked that I know I will not be able to mention them all. 1st I loved how you showed how smart Brendan was and how he solved the case. I thought it was also cool how you showed how obsessive he gets over cases. I really enjoyed the last scene when they are back at Brendan's home. I thought it was really fun. This was a great story! I also want to thank you for suggusting youtube. It worked and I got to see it. Yah! And I agree it is awful that they don't let us have it in the US. Thanks again for writing such great stories. |
| Snow'sLuckyCat 2007-06-21 ch 1, | abuseYAY! Awesome fic, dude! :) I am so glad that you didn't just write a movie-tag to the icepack scene near the film's end, for THIS was much much MORE satisfying. Great realism, detail, & character characterizations! Loved both teh Big Sister!Freya & teh Little Brother!Brendan. so cute! ;) Great whump! Great Brendan & Freya interaction! Great plot! So - this was definitely a superb fic in every way possible, Tiitan! :) :: adds this story to her faves :: ~your friend, Sharma, who's dearly hoping that you still have more in store for our intrepidly ESPing duo! ;) |
| Jack-rocks 2007-06-20 ch 1, | abuseAnother great story. Loved so much Brendan's dedication to his work and I also loved how you managed to fit Brendan's photographic memory in the story. I'm looking forward to reading more from you. |
| amsilcox 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseNice. Like how you explained about the concussion and worked in his memory. Do you have more coming? Between ThoughtCrimes and Stargate Atlantis I can almost keep my Joe fix running on full. |
| Delka 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseHappy reader here. Got the touch with this "character" too. Enjoyable and a different,enjoyable change of pace from the fan fic I read of late. ;) And now you turned me onto this kind of fan fic (of what little is out there). Thanks. Story makes me wish I had a photographic m. Works for me. |
| Sheppardster 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseAwesome :) Please tell me you have plans to write more Thoughtcrimes fics? I'm dying to read them if so :) |
| reen212000 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuseI love a good concussion! And you write them so well... Once again. Stop making me read! |
| highonscifi 2007-06-19 ch 1, | abuse*happy sigh* You sure do know how to make a gal's morning!! I'll go to work with a smile on my face! Thanks, girlfriend! |