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shiloah18 4/25/09 . chapter 10
‘I don’t mind if it bothers you.’

‘It doesn’t bother me.’

are they taLking about the tea that Athrun's picky about?

"I nodded my head and smiLe gentLy." smiLe? smiLed?

"Ok iLL be right there then." iLL? I'LL?

"I hope out of the kitchen.." hope? hop?

nyWeiZ, nice chap and for some reason, I wanna read if Athrun writes a journaL tOo.. lol XD jaa ne! ;3
monkey-101 2/10/09 . chapter 10
I bet Athrun will end up kissing Cagalli again.

Love the chapter.

Update soon.

Congrats.

:)monkey-101(:
TwilightSonnet 1/20/09 . chapter 10
you know, most of the time, i dont like the whole, journal entry, narrating my life kinda thing, but truth be told, i am absolutely intrigued by your story, and i really cant wait till you update!

please hurry :D
cottongreentea 1/20/09 . chapter 10
OHAIYO! WAZUP GIRL? Haven't talked in a while!

Oh gosh, to be honest, i had to re-read, more like skim, most of your fics to remember what was going on. Now i'm back on track!

Great chapter! I love how Athrun came to visit! Oh no! His father called? Usually it's always bad!

I just can't stop laughing at what Cags says to Meer about her and the sewer pipes! LOL! I love that!

I hope you update soon! Oh! i'm going to Tokyo in March! Whoo Hoo! ... Time to read your other fics!
cagallirockz 4/25/08 . chapter 9
(this an't a diary review but)WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!poor cagalli this story kind of makes me sad but update soon:)
colourfulgurl 3/7/08 . chapter 9
PLZ update soon! i REALLY want to see what will hapen next!
monkey-101 2/5/08 . chapter 9
AnnoyingMonkey

Date:06 February (you no wat year)

Time:Early hours of the morning

Location: dah the computer were else

Music:Where Is The Love by The Black Eyed Peas

Teenagejournal554

Awesome journal update (so to speak) I loved it well done it was awesome even though it was short but all well I'll take whatever I can get, anyways awesome job well done congrats. OH and by the way I have a very big suspicion that you and Athrun will be together soon lol, I'm probably half physic lol.

Anyways i'm loggin out talk to ya soon.
SamuraiGirl7 1/8/08 . chapter 9
Cogami

Date- Uh... yeah it's sometime during some month.

Time- We've been over this before... time is relative because by the time I start write to the time I'm done it will be completely different, not to mention the time when you actually read this.

Location- My house and again in front of the computer.

Mood- Decent, but a bit sick as of right now. Heads a little bit foggy and unclear, but oh well.

Listening to- The hum of my computer and the clicking of my keys as I type.

Okay enough boring stuff...

Teenagejournal554,

I don't think you should damn all men to hell. One, that's not very nice, and two, one of those damned men just gave you your first kiss and from the sounds of it, you enjoyed it very much. I am surprised that he actually kissed you though, a bold move on his part considering the front you put up.

How can you be mad or disappointed in a guy who took a bold step and kissed you despite all your walls? Don't forget that he's taking a big risk too. Do you think it was easy for him to kiss you like that? Imagine how much strength it took for him to kiss you when you usually aren't even nice to the guy. I always find it helpful to take things in from a different perspective and from the perspective of the other person. Hope it helped you too.

As for your poem... if that's how you truly feel then I understand. It's sad and I wonder if Athrun will be in the room when you say it. I forget, is he in the same classes as you? If he is in the room I'd love to know how he reacts to the poem if he reacts at all. Maybe he'd understand the meaning between the words... or maybe not, who knows.

Well I'm not really sure about this infinite wisdom thing, but hey, I hope I offered something of value to you.

Don't give up Cagalli for life is too precious to throw away so easily. Oh, and don't kill Athrun for kissing you okay? Besides, it was a nice kiss or so it seemed.

Cogami out-

End Entry
Mage666 1/6/08 . chapter 9
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Location-Sun bathing on Venus :D

Hour-My clock is broke :P

Muso-Timberland Ft. One Republic-Apologise

Dear Teenagejournal554,

OMG HE KISSED YOU! ROFL Get in there, girl! I'm sorry to be laughing at you right now but you seem very freaked out yet happy at the same time.

As for your poem, it seems pretty emoish but very good at the same time. I'd give you an A*! And if that's how you feel in life, then why don't you resist? If you don't resist, then nothing will ever change. Your life will continue being boring. But if you resist, colours will return in your eyes, life will be different and exciting. Remember; Your life, Your rules. You don't have to follow any order. If your unhappy living the way you are now, take that hand they offer and see if anything does change. It can't get any worse than it is, right?

Enough of my pointless waffling, hope my words help in anyway at all (hopefully in a positive way!) Hope to hear from you soon!

!

There you go! Hope you like this thing you asked for!

Damn you and your cliff hangers lol!

Mage6 :D
shiloah18 1/5/08 . chapter 9
owkei.. hmm.. yeah Cags.. I think you're in for something..

nyWeiZ, thanks for the update! jaa ne in your next one! ;3
CagalliRules 1/5/08 . chapter 9
Update! :)
Hades.Throne.Heiress 1/4/08 . chapter 9
LOL Cagalli seems to have a really had sixth sense. Or she's just not very good at guessing all in all. Happy new year!
cottongreentea 1/4/08 . chapter 9
OH! I'm smelling more love and maybe confessions in the air! Oot! Oot!
Infinite sky 1/4/08 . chapter 9
CelestialTrashxxTrash

Date-4 December

Time- 17.01

Location- Are you some kind of stocker?

Listening to- I need a hero by Bonnie Tyler

Teenagejournal554,

Wait a sec girl! You kissed that Athrun snob? What the hell were you thinking? I thought you hated him and his vicious gang of rich snobs!

Back to your post….( I am still startled though…..)

He stole your first kiss? And you feel…different? That doesn’t matter at all hun. Its normal!

It’s your first kiss after all! Really I also don’t know why he did that. Maybe he harbors a crush on you?

Argh….only God and he knows…

You’re not crazy; you’re just in shock that’s all. No need for fear XD

About your poem…..WHAT THE HECK? ARE YOU EMO? WELL? ARE YOU? ANSWER!

The poem is actually really good, its wise, emo, dark. Exactly what I like. :3

Are you happy to hear that now? If you don’t reply I’ll have to stop reading your blogs and stop giving you my infinite wisdom. And yes, you can count that sentence as a threat.

Till your next update Girl, I’ll be waiting eagerly to sniffle in your life again. LOL

-

And again I did as you told me to do _

it took you so long to update this :P

Please update sooner!
imuzuok 12/27/07 . chapter 8
OH MY GOODNESS! HE KISSED HER! THEY KISSED! *squeals* That was so unexpected!

Wow. I saw my review in this chapter. That is so cool! I feel honored! Thank you for putting my review in such an awesome story!

Looking forward to the next chapter,

imuzuok

:)
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