|Reviews for Serpent's Egg|
| RelentlessRecusant 11/26/09 . chapter 1
Very sophisticated prose - it is a fantastic job, start to finish. The very cultured writing makes it outstanding.
| Strein 3/25/09 . chapter 6
Christie is such an intriguing, sexy
woman. I personally think her alignment is Neutral Evil. Her mastery of
Snake Fist at such a young age is surely respectable. There is also just
something about an 24-year-old British woman who is a dead-sexy, cold-as-ice
female assassin that's just so damn irresistable! Maybe it's the thrill of
danger that comes from knowing that at any moment this untamed feline can
effortlessly kill you without even the slightest hint of remorse. You know
that someone with her skills and outlook has killed countless times before -
and at such a young age, too! She is quite an entrepreneur to have come such
a long way in so little time!
| F E I L D Y 7/26/07 . chapter 6
Ey! Nice ending man... awesome conclusion to an awesome story. Oh and, I love this line: "She gave no more thought to the debris of her last than a snake did for its shed skin."
But.. one thing really confused me alittle. Christie went through alot of trouble to Avenge her Father, but in the begining of the story, it seemed like she didn't even like him much. Eh whatev... I probobly just missed something.
It was really cool how she killed Arnholt, that was one Proffessional assassination. Really, really good story man.
| Tarma Hartley 7/26/07 . chapter 6
EXCELLENT! WELL DONE! This was a wonderfully crafted story and very creepy! Love the twist at the end-I didn't see that one coming, I admit! :)
| F E I L D Y 7/22/07 . chapter 5
Nice. Another awesome chapter man. Can't wait to see what she does next.
I hope you do a chapter explaining how Christie gets her pet Panther. That would rule.
| F E I L D Y 7/3/07 . chapter 3
Sick chapter man. You really hit the nail on the head with Christie's personality. And even the original characters you came up with are really cool...
| F E I L D Y 6/27/07 . chapter 1
What a great story man... Seriously. Best backstory fic I've ever read. Keep up the good work.
| Boggy 6/24/07 . chapter 1
I check the archives daily for new additions to the DOA library, and was pleansantly surprised to find not a ninja story, not a Hitomi story (both of which have worn thin), but an insightful and rivoting Christie back-story fic. Kudos for remembering that other DOA characters do exist.
The piece is very mature-not so much in "rating" as in concept and tone. The language is sophisticated; the dialogue flows seamlessly with your descriptions. Arnholt demonstrates a level of wit you would expect from an older, more experienced man, and Christie maintains the commanding sensuality of her in-game counterpart. More importantly, the events are so convincing, so thoughtfully constructed, a reader could be easily fooled into believing your story canon!
Overall, great piece. A real diamond in the rough. I look forward to future installments (assuming you choose to continue the story).