 alyssa 2008-12-19 . chapter 8 WOW what an awsome story, I can't wait for the next chapter to come up! You an excelent writer if I do say so myself. It's one of the best stories I've read so far! xxD |
 Yume Ninja 2008-10-31 . chapter 8 i need more!! its so insanely good!! TMM 4eva!! |
 mewpurin-chan 2008-08-07 . chapter 8wow ^^ my first review on ! i review here about the entire story so far, okay? I wanted to say i truely loved the story. It goes perfectly with the characters and i really LOVE piper-chan uhh he's so kawaii, ne! i wonder what his real/original name is... uh i wanna know, ne! and how the fight continues... i was so touched while reading the story. i cried while reading pipers story, smiled at finding out more about mintos soft side, nearly fell down my chair at some taru/purin moments (my fav couple ever ^^), felt with kisshu and was impressed from pai showing emotions - i can so see all these things happening! it's perfectly written too, and i couldn't stop reading until i finished it so far. my one and only wish: PLEASE UPDATE SOON! this is to good for not being continued, ne... and thx for the story, ne! |
 Insert Generic Fan Name Here 2008-07-19 . chapter 6May I start this review by appologizing for taking so VERY long to review? I've already read all the chapters, I come back read them all over again...and say 'I really should review' but do I? No! Geez! It's been like a year since this was updated :( Makes me sad. The amount of M/K on here is very limited to unfinished,OOC,or plain SMUT! No offense to those writing it. Random sex stories are just very disappointing when you're hoping for something sweet and that takes time to develop...agh. I would really appreciate it if you could please update this...I really like where it's going. Kisshu's not quite over Ichigo but he's trying...and Minto's jealous of Ichigo because Kisshu still likes her...and...meh. I need to reread chapters 7/8 to remember everything but this is the most in character M/K story I've ever read. And it holds the show's tone...I'm sad to see it unfinished. And uh...I was wondering if maybe you could put a pic up on DA of what Piper looks like? Or something along those lines...if you don't want to that's completely understandable but...I am curious. I've pretty much completely lost faith in the TMM section of FF...completely disappointed with everything that's added. Everything good is always unfinished. I'm hoping I won't have to say the same about THIS story. I've been mostly over in the Invader Zim section of FF, but I remembered I STILL hadn't reviewed for this and decided to do so -nods- I love how Purin teased Retasu about Pai...and then Retasu asking Minto about Kisshu...ah. I was wondering if anyone had noticed that. I wonder how Ichigo will react to it? I mean, I know Kisshu's still torn about her but he is apparently interested in Minto and Ichigo's bound to find out eventually. Ah..I really want to see the next chapter -puppy dog eyes- If you're busy that's completely understandable but I'm willing to sell my soul! ...okay...maybe not that but I DO want to see the next chapter and a lot of other people do to so...please update?
Okay then! On to the chapter review!
Aw! The Taruto/Purin moment literally had me crying "D Tears of joy. It was so cute! -glomps random passerby- ...okay then! -lets passerby go/passerby runs off scared-
I was a little confused about the 'It was a shame things wouldn't last...' part until Yuebin showed up. I like Yuebin, though...I mean, probably not with Purin (Purin/Taruto are too cute not to be together) but as a person...he's okay. I don't hate him like a lot of people seem to. Aww :D Taruto got 'warm fuzzy feelings' from helping Purin..that's so cute! And then Pai wanting to go with Retasu on patrol :D 'Lame excuses' is right...
And then Piper "Your dog went CRAZY and started destroying everything!" -holds Miki up- "Bark bark :D! -licks her nose- "...yeah, that would work.
And then poor Kisshu...has another mew on his mind...ah, but THIS mew is completely untaken :D I love M/K!
And then the thing with Yuebin went pretty well...I wonder how Purin's father would react to his daughter being the fiance of an alien...and if Kish/Pai will find out about it..and how everyone else will react...heh. And Piper/Heicha's little game of tag :D That was so cute.
But my favorite part of course was Kisshu winking at Minto ^_^ That was adorable! That and the 'tweety pie' part :D I feel a little bad for Taruto, though. Having Kisshu making fun of him like that...ah well at least Piper's starting to hate Kisshu less because of it.
XD This was my favorite part (or second...ya know...after the M/K stuff)
“Tart,” Pai instructed, “go with her.”
The brunet’s eyes widened as she skipped off toward the changing room. “In there?!” he pointed.
Lettuce covered her mouth when Pai snapped indignantly. “NO! On patrol!”
Tart wiped his brow in relief while Kisshu floated down behind him. “Hehe, nice try squirt.”
XD I laughed SO hard at that part
Please update the story soon and thank you for coming up with this story :D |
 MewCocoa 2008-03-15 . chapter 3 HOLY COW THIS IS GOOD! please write more!! |
 ThunderRiver411 2008-03-09 . chapter 8Nice story. I'm working on a crossover. If you have time check it out. |
 DarkWingedLove 2007-12-26 . chapter 8 OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON.I'm begging you! |
 MewIchigoZoey 2007-10-16 . chapter 8I finally finished reading all the chapters and I can only say one word: Wow! This is one of the greatest TMM fan fics I've ever read! Everyone was so in character, and the descriptions are great! Piper is adorable, and I enjoyed seeing Mint's sweeter side around him...and that Kisshu..calling Mint his new "toy"...since I'm an MxK fan, I sure enjoyed the scenes with them. I will definitely be watching for your next update...no pressure though, cause I know what it's like to be writing, and have to wait for inspiration and ideas to come to you. So yeah. Great story, ~nya! -^_^- |
 Mystic Mage-chan 2007-10-05 . chapter 8Please update quickly, nyau no da! I love this story! Your chapters are a great length, and I love Piper-chan, nyau no da! He's really cute. |
 hiatus-desu 2007-09-08 . chapter 8This is a good fic, with plot, schemes and credibility. I'm so glad you didn't rush into the Kishinto pairing and that it took time to grow - too many authors (myself too, admittedly) rush the growing stages of affection so we can get to the fluff.
Story Alert-ed. Because it's that awesome. :) |
 Shanequa 2007-09-03 . chapter 8Woot! An update! TWO, in fact, because I missed the last one!
Aww, everything's resolved now! Yay! xD
-Nikki |
 Alyssa 2007-09-03 . chapter 8 this is the best tokyo mew mew story EVER! keep going! how long is it going to be, anyway? like, how many chapters? update soon! ^_^ |
 Amaya or Mew Amaya 2007-09-03 . chapter 8AWESOME! U HAVE TO CONTINUE!
okay... I'm good...
your story rocks
and it's halarious! |
 starjosie19 2007-08-23 . chapter 2THAT CHAPTER WAS SO SWEET I WISH I HAD SUCH PRIVLLEGES TO WRITE BUT MY LIFE IS SO BUSY SOMETIMES I JUST BURY MY HEAD IN MY BOOKS I ALSO THINK THAT IF I HAVE A PROBLEM I CAN JUST HIDE IN MY BOOKS AND CRY! DO YOU HAVE ANY SUGGESTIONS PLEAZE HEL ME MY EMAIL IS jrailowal@sympatico.ca |
 starjosie19 2007-08-23 . chapter 1THIS CHAPTER IS SO FANASTIC I WISH YOU WRITE MORE |