aw yay. i rly did like tht poem. (and ur writing/story) :D, i'll b lookin fr tht sequel. :) continue writing, i like ur style. and for now tht's all, i must be off! :)

OH MY GOD. Please say there's a sequel!

I feel bad for poor Trouble. Is he going to heal?

okay, stop having amazing chapters or i'm never gonna get any sleep

It's like I'm reading another AF book :D

The note made me laugh out loud xD

I'm sorry I haven't reviewed yet, but wow - I REALLY like what I'm reading. It's exciting and interesting and you portray all of the characters so well - I don't even mind your OCs (I normally detest all OCs, well-written or not :P)

You are a great writer with a super interesting plot and I'm really glad I get to enjoy reading your fic! :D

So I read this whole story beginning to end today, so I apologize for not reviewing every chapter. But I will say that this was a relatively good story. I liked the plot, and the characters were decently portrayed. I'm not sure whether or not I personally enjoyed how it all ended. Nevertheless, I think it was a good ending for this particular plot. Congrats on the Orion nomination, it was well deserved.

the story was great i really liked it! the story had a great plot and the chapters were long as well as nothing was rushed! great job on the story
keep on writing and ill keep reading
Burnup77

well, by this time, this review will be helping you on to your 300th... ;D congrats, you're a classic author! ^^

*chuckles* hm...i hope those doors are sound-proof, otherwise the jaw-dropping will be accompanied with looks of shock and mild disgust...

*pouts* alas, even i can't read fast enough to finish this today... *emails link to self for bookmarking*,
brittney

*giggles* he should really see those coming, you know. ;D

oh, and it's "s'il vous plait, donnez-moi des *browses dictionary* revues" *grins* the french are uppity, so you have to use the formal version... >.< way too many conjugations...

*madly grinning from amusement*,
brittney

cudgeon?

brittney

Very well done, But at the risk of being accused and sent into a useless internet argument I think you should spend more time on the plot of the story building the romance not the other way around, but other than that another extremely good chapter.

Very moving peice of literature. I think given some time (actually two peices of time to catch up to your aparently overburdened schedule)you can become a very successful romance novel writer. If your wondering yes, I did predict you would do that in the storyline.

Very interesting screneplay on this chapter I must say...
and the most accurately portrayedversions of Eoin Colfers characters I have seen yet...