wow! that was really, really good! well, i thought it described Edwards thoughts quite well:D you had it down pat :D

Very cool. I like it.

simply wonderful

I love the words you use in this are so many big words that it makes me want to learn the dictionary just so I can write more like this. Words are the very essence of our lives and you made the essence of Edwards very clear. My review is a good one and I like the chapter very much.

That was fabulous. (: Twilight is basically life. Beyond moth other fictions. It was definitely one of the better Edward POVs I've seen. You pulled him off pretty well. xD

this is so awesome! even if it's a oneshot, it's still awesome!

good job! you give edward's perspective very well.

i love this story! i think you should continue it because its amazing! i dare say its OUTRAGEOUS! lol! update soon!

I love twilight too! This was really good I think you should write some more!

That was so good and complex.

Ideal one shot. I can't find anything wrong with it...not even spelling for god's sake!

I like it. It's rare, in a good kind of way.