Update...NOW! I want to see what happens, I must see what happens. YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! YOU CAN'T WRITE SOMETHING SO GOOD AND THEN LEAVE IT!

I wish you would write more to this, it is so interesting and I know you are probably busy, but I miss it so much. It has been so long since your last update and you promised you would soon.

I'm surprised at how long it's been since someone begged you to update! I'll have to take it upon myself.

Pleease update!

It's a wonderful story and I really hope you are going to finish. Don't leave us hanging!

brilliant- more. and lots of jareth.

thabks

It's a travesty that a story this good was apparently given up on, as it hasn't been updated in over a year.

Very captivating. I've been waiting hopefully for quite a few months that you might finish it. You're nearly there! One last battle and a lovely ending!

Ack, good fic. Hope you come back and finish it, it's cool.

Spiffy story.

I likes the dream concept please hurries with tha next chapter!

cool chapter. I greatly look forward to see how this story finishes. Keep up the great work.

My..My...Such a good story, wish I wrote it. Please continue...it is unfair to leave a tale incomplete

*squealing delightedly* I discovered your story a while back... can't remember if I commented or not. But I am adoring, and when I finally returned here, I had 8 beautiful chapters to catch up on. Oh, please please please update again soon... This is such a wonderful story. And all this being said at the risk of sounding like some starry-eyed, easily-impressed newbie, lol.

-Laurie

More...you must write MORE!:)

Full of suspense! Write some more soon thanks!

that's good...jsut waiting for the j/s bit...*hint hint* update soooon!

Cool chapter. I look forward to see how the next one ends. Keep up the great work.