O_O This was so sad.
thank you for the great story. its faved.
BakaRamenBowl

Om...g... I think I just died and was reborn with a new awakening of something just so... beautiful. You have inspired me. First story on here I had ever read was this one. It just completely inspired me to begin my writing career. I guess I just discovered your story again and decided to review. This is one of... no this IS THE BEST story I have ever read. (and I have read a lot.)It's short its sweet. It tells not of some rough meaningless sex. But true making love. What its all about. I wish so much that the new generations now and to come, could understand if only a fraction of what real honest love is. All I can say is thank you for writing this story. It is my inspiration. I hope some day after all the writing I do I can be as good as you.

OMG! I was like hm **cry cry** that was REALLY good! The ending was perfect! Great amazingly well done job!

Amazing, so well written that I got jealous.
I bet you could make any pairing work. You use perfect words in perfect situations and it just makes everything flow.
I wish that I would be able to write like you one day;)
A beautiful piece of work.

BEST Rin fanfic I have ever read. Best Rin fanfic on the web Best Eva! I would just like to thank you, thank you for writing this, thank you so much! It was beuaitful heartbreaking and all around pretty hot.

Ending was perfect, feelings were perfect, descriptions were perfect.

out of 100 I'd give it 1 million.

Thank you.

That had to be the sexiest and most depressing story Ive ever read. I really cried at the end. Brilliant is about all I can say.

Wow. This really deserves more reviews.

I don't think "good" or "nice job" does justice to this piece of writing.

It's beautifully written and I found myself in tears in more than a few parts. This is the the first fic I've read concerning this couple, and I don't know if I'll ever be able to read another after this one. I don't think anything will be able to live up to this.

You have a true talent for writing.

Simply beautiful. Pure, absolute beauty in every sense of the term. Wonderful work, Madam; it's rare to see this pairing anywhere, and you've done marveously with it.

I cannot believe how good that was. I was browsing your fics to see if I'd overlooked anything and realized with no small measure of surprise that I hadn't read this one yet. You seriously NEED to get published. Seriously.

This is such a beautiful but heartwrenching story. I just thought out of random one day on how the pairing of Rin and the 4th would be interesting (if sakuraxkakashi fanfiction is out there why not this?) so i searched and this was the first fic I read and it was absolutely amazing. Your details and everything is so...I can't describe how much it tugged my heartstrings. Thank you for writing such a great fanfic. And I'm surprised you don't have more reviews!! Keep up the fantastic work =)

...wow.
your best piece yet.
this story had actually caused a lump in my throat...
wonderful work, and i'm sure you're used to that compliment, but i don't know how to praise you enough...

WOW!! That was an amazing fanfic!! Really great story!!

Jesus, that was great. I didn't really know what to expect since I'd never read anything with this pairing. But I should've known you'd be able to make it work, heck, not just "make it work", but you built quite something out of it. The progression was so smooth that nothing seemed displaced or forced, it was the kind of story that captivates you without making a big deal out of it, and by the end of it you can't help but feel this tug in your chest. Impressive in every possible way, good job =)

This was a fantastic piece of fanfiction, then again it was you who wrote it. I've never read a story like this, or this pairing, but it was beautiful. Your use of words make such an impact, and it's pulled off so very well. No matter what you write, you can make it seem plausiable. It was interesting in the begining, captivating throughout, and fulfilling at the end. I'm quite jealous of you ability and talent as an author. There is so much more I want to say, but I can't think of how to say it, and it's getting pretty late. ^-^ Please, by all means keep writing stories, I look foreward to more of your work, it's always so great. ^-^

Cheers!

How depressing...