 andrew 1/10/08 . chapter 1 Well, technically, Kalypso (And, yes, that is how it is properly spelled) is from Ogygia, so she would have a Turkish accent. |
 Morbidmuch 6/28/07 . chapter 1Generally I like it, it was well-written |
 Topgallant 6/26/07 . chapter 1Very touching. I'm rather glad that Elizabeth chose the answer that she did, and I can't help but think Will was being a little selfish. |
 Paris 6/26/07 . chapter 1 Wow! I like it a lot! Creative name for Elizabeth's kid. Tia Dalma's accent was a nice touch. You're good at writing fan fictions. Everyone was very in character. It makes me sad that Elizabeth dies...but everyone must die. Oh well. |
 KatedeKlerK23-10 6/21/07 . chapter 1well that was dim of her! |
 darkrunner 6/20/07 . chapter 1I don't usually read POTC fics, so I'm not really sure what to put in this review. _;; I only happened to read this one because you're on my author alert. It was a very good fic. I don't even have any consrtuctive criticism to give. Which is very rare. I did guess James's namesake, and I thought it was very fitting.
Thanks for the great fic! |
 flickaXxOoXx 6/20/07 . chapter 1Aww. A very sweet but sad story! I enjoye your writting much! And Calypo's accent wasnt a bad try! Nice job!
Flicka |
 liz 6/20/07 . chapter 1 beautiful! |
 An Unknown Writer 6/20/07 . chapter 1aw! such a sweet and heartfelt story! love it! |
 Flightstorm 6/20/07 . chapter 1Now that was beautiful. Brought me very close to tears, it did... You did a fine job. |
 pirateluver 6/20/07 . chapter 1great job! i don't think the accent was bad! i love the story keep up the good work! |
 purplediamond7 6/20/07 . chapter 1Please excuse me while I cry my eyes out... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT! It sort of reminded me of Harry Potter 5, when Sirius dies... anyways, when Will was trying to make Elizabeth part of the crew... SO SAD! Wonderful story! |
 a muggle named Caity 6/19/07 . chapter 1That was a really sad, but wonderfully written, story. It seriously almost made me cry. I applude you. |
 liz3386 6/19/07 . chapter 1I think you did quite well with Calypso's accent.
But I hafta ask, why would Elizabeth name her child after James Norrington instead of her husband? Just curious as to your reasoning.
Anyway, good fic. |
 lateBloomer04 6/19/07 . chapter 1OMG that was the saddest W/E story I have ever read! *tear*
Really well written though. Good job!
I would've said yes though. To be with Will. :D |