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andrew 1/10/08 . chapter 1
Well, technically, Kalypso (And, yes, that is how it is properly spelled) is from Ogygia, so she would have a Turkish accent.
Morbidmuch 6/28/07 . chapter 1
Generally I like it, it was well-written
Topgallant 6/26/07 . chapter 1
Very touching. I'm rather glad that Elizabeth chose the answer that she did, and I can't help but think Will was being a little selfish.
Paris 6/26/07 . chapter 1
Wow! I like it a lot! Creative name for Elizabeth's kid. Tia Dalma's accent was a nice touch. You're good at writing fan fictions. Everyone was very in character. It makes me sad that Elizabeth dies...but everyone must die. Oh well.
KatedeKlerK23-10 6/21/07 . chapter 1
well that was dim of her!
darkrunner 6/20/07 . chapter 1
I don't usually read POTC fics, so I'm not really sure what to put in this review. _;; I only happened to read this one because you're on my author alert. It was a very good fic. I don't even have any consrtuctive criticism to give. Which is very rare. I did guess James's namesake, and I thought it was very fitting.

Thanks for the great fic!
flickaXxOoXx 6/20/07 . chapter 1
Aww. A very sweet but sad story! I enjoye your writting much! And Calypo's accent wasnt a bad try! Nice job!

Flicka
liz 6/20/07 . chapter 1
beautiful!
An Unknown Writer 6/20/07 . chapter 1
aw! such a sweet and heartfelt story! love it!
Flightstorm 6/20/07 . chapter 1
Now that was beautiful. Brought me very close to tears, it did... You did a fine job.
pirateluver 6/20/07 . chapter 1
great job! i don't think the accent was bad! i love the story keep up the good work!
purplediamond7 6/20/07 . chapter 1
Please excuse me while I cry my eyes out... I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT! It sort of reminded me of Harry Potter 5, when Sirius dies... anyways, when Will was trying to make Elizabeth part of the crew... SO SAD! Wonderful story!
a muggle named Caity 6/19/07 . chapter 1
That was a really sad, but wonderfully written, story. It seriously almost made me cry. I applude you.
liz3386 6/19/07 . chapter 1
I think you did quite well with Calypso's accent.

But I hafta ask, why would Elizabeth name her child after James Norrington instead of her husband? Just curious as to your reasoning.

Anyway, good fic.
lateBloomer04 6/19/07 . chapter 1
OMG that was the saddest W/E story I have ever read! *tear*

Really well written though. Good job!

I would've said yes though. To be with Will. :D
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