This would've actually been nice to read through. It's a bit different from the other Zemyx fics I've been reading, so I was getting curious as how this would proceed. Plus I liked the English. Too bad it doesn't seem like you'll be finishing it any time soon. Shame, really.

But thanks for the read.

Luv, reb

XD I love this :D

and I thought that the river Styx was passable (since some heroes managed to cross it); and that Persephone is only trapped in the Underworld because she ate a pomegranate?
:)

awsome story!

i lurve it

As the greek God's? Oh Jesus, that's hilarious. Are you going to continue this?

BAHAHAHAH... Wow. This has got to be one of the most hilarious, crack-tastic, and freakin' awesome stories I've read in a while. I absolutely LOVED the roles into which you've placed the Orgy XI members and the Greek mythology twist on the series.

And wtf?! Marluxia was the one with the bun in the oven? Larxene was the father?! I seriously fell out of my chair laughing until I cried at that one. XD

I really look forward to seeing how Zexion and Demyx's relationship will work out/develop/progress/etc (that is, if it will at all, seeing as how Dem doesn't seem to be taking too kindly to his newly acquired 'husband' XD).

And gah! I love LeonXCloud! XD

And Zemyx. <3

I think you are an amazingly talented writer who deserves way more love and reviews on her stories. I know you are probably really busy with all of the work and crap that college can throw at you, but if you could please (pretty please with a puppy-faced Demyx on top XD) update this story (or Surgeon General's Warning :D) soon, fans like me would be ever so grateful and pleased, rabidly so. XD

I love this story so much! It's so funny, I was laughing all the way through. I would quote something, but I would end up quoting the entire story. XD This story = epic win. :3

I was never great for submitting feedback on anything, but I can't help but admit... This is the most amazing crack I have ever seen in my life. Which is a lot, because when my friend and I get together, we can redefine crack to new dimentions. It scares me how good we are, actually. And then you go and make us look like amatuers...

If I could, I would personally buy Kingdom Hearts from Squeenix and Disney Interactiive and all the other people who claim to have dibs on it and hand it to you on a platinum platter. You could make millions on this. And Desiderata, which is also amazing, if not crack-ish.

(and between you and me, I can see Larxene topping... it's kind of freaky, actually)

If I had anything to argue with, it would be... scratch that, I can't argue. Pure, unaltered win is pure, unaltered win. With a little bit of Epic on the side.

Sorry, I probably sound really retarded ^^' I'll shut my mouth/fingers now. Thank you for taking the time to read!

My gawd I love your story. All the messing around, and just how the hell did Larxene get Marluxia pregnant? I don't think the world is ready to know.

It's 2:20am, and like all good little boys and girls, I _should_ be sleeping right now.

But who gives a ** about beign good?

So, Riku is _>

lol.
it's funny. :3

This is a really funny story, it made me laugh so hard! Please please please update it!

And I love your Zemyxs. ^_^ You are like a Zemyx god to me.

Poor Demyx. But I admire his stubborness. It'll be interesting to see how his and Zexion's relationship pans out. And the line from "Hercules" made me giggle. Oh, and the entire situation between Marluxia and Larxene is great. I'm excited for the next chapter! :D

Haha. The crack is awesome. I happen to be a firm believer that Hades/Persephone is one of the greatest pairings/stories in mythology ever (it reminds me muchly of the Beauty and the Beast, which is my favoritest story of ALL time :D), and I'm loving this so far. I'm excited to keep reading. And Sora as Cupid? So, so cute :D.

PLEASE UPDATE I BEG YOU! ESPECIALLY AFTER I LAUGHED LIKE A MAD LARXENE IN FRONT OF MY LAPTOP AND AFTER I SAW THE LAST UPDATED DATE! It's just too awesome to let it go

Amazing as usual. I love the greek mythology twist to the story, its hilarious and engaging. Hope you update this ^-^