This is really good. I normally don't read Power Ranger fics (I mostly stick to the fantasy stuff) but this is very well written. I really (underline, bold and italic that word) like this and can't wait for another chapter. :)

Cool idea.I love the new monster btw!

I like it! Thought for sure that Rita was going to suceed but the Rangers won in the end.

THANKS FOR REVIEWING TO MY STORY AND I LIKE YOUR STORY MAN IT GREAT

Enjoying the fic so far. Keep up the good work.

I like the plotline! It's kind of confusing, though. You haven't gotten the paragraphing quite right. Every time someone speaks or you switch focus, you need to paragraph there. Otherwise, it's brillant!

This had a good plot, but there are a few flaws in the execution.

First off, this seems to take place in Season 1 (i.e. versus Rita), yet we have the White Ranger, who in canon didn't show up until mid-Season 2. Why the discrepancy?

Second, the verb tense keeps changing from present to past. That kind of threw me off pace reading it.

Finally, you have paragraphs with multiple speakers talking in them. It's always been my understanding that a new paragraph should be started each time a new person starts talking.

Please don't take this as a flame; I'm just trying to help. Good luck in future endeavors!

NICE

You hooked it up. i wish you good luck as you go.

Very good. I like it.

Not bad

Good plot! Very action-packed. I would mayb think about using smaller paragraphs though to help the reader's eye be able to move through the story more comfortably.

You read mine so I figure Id read yours. Nice Job.

It's perfect I'm glad you wrote

Not a bad opening.

It's a little too rushed, given the amount of events that occur in such a short period. In general, you could probably spend a little more time setting up scenes and giving more detailed descriptions.

Also, remember to separate dialogue up so each new speaker starts a new paragraph. For instance, if Rita is talking to Finster, and Finster suddenly chimes in, make sure that Finster's dialogue starts a new paragraph. This will help mightily with reading comprehension.

Good luck as this progresses.