 jackbyang7 2009-07-11 . chapter 36 great chapter! sick and aie is love I'm also chinese lol |
 evilwriterofdoom 2009-07-10 . chapter 36great job!
haha in your face galbitorix!
but seriously awesome chapter! |
 Queen of everything pineapple 2009-07-06 . chapter 26you should cut the swearing, hold on , as the Queen of everything pineapple by the power invested in me, i order you to cut the sweaing, other than that ,it's fine. |
 Queen of everything pineapple 2009-07-06 . chapter 14 I'm chinese so i do know what aie means,is Illera chinese? |
 xLilypadsx 2009-07-04 . chapter 35Is this an update I hear?? :D
REALLY? An UPDATE?
Usually I'd be harassing authors into updating and you too, but I'v been pretty pre-occupied in the star trek fandom. x_x
Great chapter, its late here and I'm still processing into my mind what I just read. But i stoped and read the chapter and left a review. =P
Im sacrificing my health for you! XD
Good luck and update soon! |
 arygon 2009-07-04 . chapter 35 sick great chapter it's awesome! :D:D:D:D:D:D |
 jackbyang7 yes the one mention 2009-07-04 . chapter 35 yeah! you updated I read all your other stories too their awesome! |
 xLilypadsx 2009-05-12 . chapter 34Cliffhangers! Why? >.<
=(
Sorry, can't stick around long, I g2g now.
Good luck and update soon! As always! |
 Imi 2009-04-12 . chapter 33amazing! i would so like to see more eragon and arya together, and murtaugh and Illera are so meant to be!! i think you are doing an absolutley fantastic job!! |
 Imi 2009-04-11 . chapter 3great! |
 MidnightAnimeAngel 2009-03-25 . chapter 33Oh! I liked this chappie too! :D Sorry it took me so long to review; I haven't had much time on the internet lately. :S
Please update again soon. I really like the way you've developed Illera's character. Something seems fishy to me... like something big is about to happen- and not necessarily something good...
Okay, so this is just my way of saying I really liked it and can't wait for more!
~MidnightAnimeAngel |
 xLilypadsx 2009-03-23 . chapter 33New chapter!
Not much Eragon/Arya fluff but the plots moving pretty quickly! :D Hurry with the updates!
add some Eragon/Arya! ...please?
And kinda, sorta, forget about those other character for a while? o_O Most likely not possible, but add in a few moments with them! =P
I like Illera/Murtagh too though. =P but maybe not as much as Eragon/Arya.
Geez, Uru'baen.
Illera won't betray them. Would she? I don't think she would...
Can't wait to see what happens,
Good luck and update soon! |
 xLilypadsx 2009-03-23 . chapter 32Geez I missed TWO chapters?? I just read chapter 33...and realized I never read chapter 32. o_o Well, its going on my story alert now so hope fully I won't miss any more!
Love this chapter! Eragon and Aryas relationship is really getting stronger... And add some more fluff! This chapter had some. ^_^
Ah...this review is so overdue...Sorry!
Good luck and update soon! Now to review the next chapter...
Seriously. 5 months. |
 Valinor's Twilight 2009-03-22 . chapter 33Great update. Nice description. I loved it. Keep up the great work. |
 Yalina 2009-03-21 . chapter 9 Oh and it's a really good story. |