Heehee, I laughed a lot at this! It's very well written and nicely worded, I liked that. This is going to go on my favorites!

HA! love it!

that was h0t...PLS UPDATE S0ON!

Loved this story, needs a followup though!

Oh, another beautiful story! I really loved your characterisations of Ed and Roy. Ed's obsession with the food...Roy's blushing...it was all just wonderful! And good characters are always what makes a story special.

Looking forward to reading more of your work!

Sam

hot

o_O Love this... Cleverly written, very in-character, and never lost my interest. And your Roy is perfect.

Damn! I love this! I love Roy!

I love you for writing this!

Keep on keepin' on my fellow RoyxEd fan...

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yea! i've read this story a couple of times before, still good, after 2 years of being uke i guess ed deserves it. very sweet story

*giggle* ah that was just genius i loved it!

Loved it. F'real.

GREAT story...but you never got to the lemon! Just some lime...some great lime...grr, I think I'm a yaoi addict. UPDATE soon if you are going too...you should...like, now XD well actually I prefer Roy seme...It was awesome how Ed came on himself and didn't even know XD

HahaThe Yaoi Ninja

I'm not a fan of yaoi and I usually won't read it (I only wrote it once and then just to make fun of it), but this was, dare I say it - elegant? I can see you've applied many of the lessons learned from "Branded". Life is not all about sex, but mostly about relationships, the give and take, the little battles won, lost and drawn. Bravo!

that was cute and sexy, i liked it very much