 a nitpick 2009-10-23 . chapter 26 I don't think Harry knew Luna in the 4th book. |
 Hebi R. 2009-10-13 . chapter 28It is probably not a good thing that the only thing in this chapter that seemed REALLY strange was Xander becoming pen-pals with Dracula.
Thanks for the ficlet! |
 Bobboky 2009-10-12 . chapter 28awesome, so very very awesome... it is like a Ron Stoppable / Xander Harris Mix |
 Wonderbee31 2009-10-12 . chapter 28This was a bit of fun here, and just enjoyed the diea of the two of them, Giles and Spike working at bugging Angel while the two Xanders are stuck at a point. |
 Wonderbee31 2009-10-12 . chapter 27Heh, that was a fun moment there, and can just see the principals, and then that last show of Fawkes taking the guys drink, LOL. |
 Faria Lyton 2009-10-12 . chapter 28Oh, come on, you're Dogbertcarroll - since when did you need a plot? :P |
 SomeGuyFawkes 2009-10-11 . chapter 27Sweet. |
 Tigerman 2009-10-10 . chapter 28Too bad this doesn't come with a ful story, but I know how lame a story can get resting on solely a cool twist and no plot to make it last. Most story that get abandonned are that way. This chapter fit well with the others, as well as random chapters can fit with others.
I rather like Power!Xander or simply BTVS stories that focus on the guy. He could have become so much more in the original storyline, but he prooved that an ordinary guy with principle can do much in the world too. And that give us the oportunity to fool around with the plot and the characters on ffdotnet, like you did here.
Good work! It was entertaining, as usual!
Tigerman |
 Daniel14541 2009-10-10 . chapter 28All Hail godogma! |
 Innortal 2009-10-10 . chapter 27Very funny work, enjoyable ending. |
 The Wandering Soul of 1014 2009-10-10 . chapter 28-Normally, I wouldn't say this, but with a tale like this, who needs a plot? I mean: 2 Xanders = 2x the chaos! |
 Firehedgehog 2009-10-10 . chapter 28oh so freaking please make this one a real fic and not just a fragment! |
 daniel 29 2009-10-10 . chapter 27These ideas may not be completed but it doesn't make them any less interesting ideas though |
 Djibriel 2009-10-10 . chapter 27._. ...I love you so much. :D
SNAPE SKIPPING in this fic = CUTEST DEMENTED THING EVER. |
 The Wandering Soul of 1014 2009-10-06 . chapter 26-Wouldn't mind seeing more of this.
Happy writing, and update soon! |