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a nitpick
2009-10-23 . chapter 26
I don't think Harry knew Luna in the 4th book.
Hebi R.
2009-10-13 . chapter 28
It is probably not a good thing that the only thing in this chapter that seemed REALLY strange was Xander becoming pen-pals with Dracula.

Thanks for the ficlet!
Bobboky
2009-10-12 . chapter 28
awesome, so very very awesome... it is like a Ron Stoppable / Xander Harris Mix
Wonderbee31
2009-10-12 . chapter 28
This was a bit of fun here, and just enjoyed the diea of the two of them, Giles and Spike working at bugging Angel while the two Xanders are stuck at a point.
Wonderbee31
2009-10-12 . chapter 27
Heh, that was a fun moment there, and can just see the principals, and then that last show of Fawkes taking the guys drink, LOL.
Faria Lyton
2009-10-12 . chapter 28
Oh, come on, you're Dogbertcarroll - since when did you need a plot? :P
SomeGuyFawkes
2009-10-11 . chapter 27
Sweet.
Tigerman
2009-10-10 . chapter 28
Too bad this doesn't come with a ful story, but I know how lame a story can get resting on solely a cool twist and no plot to make it last. Most story that get abandonned are that way. This chapter fit well with the others, as well as random chapters can fit with others.

I rather like Power!Xander or simply BTVS stories that focus on the guy. He could have become so much more in the original storyline, but he prooved that an ordinary guy with principle can do much in the world too. And that give us the oportunity to fool around with the plot and the characters on ffdotnet, like you did here.

Good work! It was entertaining, as usual!

Tigerman
Daniel14541
2009-10-10 . chapter 28
All Hail godogma!
Innortal
2009-10-10 . chapter 27
Very funny work, enjoyable ending.
The Wandering Soul of 1014
2009-10-10 . chapter 28
-Normally, I wouldn't say this, but with a tale like this, who needs a plot? I mean: 2 Xanders = 2x the chaos!
Firehedgehog
2009-10-10 . chapter 28
oh so freaking please make this one a real fic and not just a fragment!
daniel 29
2009-10-10 . chapter 27
These ideas may not be completed but it doesn't make them any less interesting ideas though
Djibriel
2009-10-10 . chapter 27
._. ...I love you so much. :D
SNAPE SKIPPING in this fic = CUTEST DEMENTED THING EVER.
The Wandering Soul of 1014
2009-10-06 . chapter 26
-Wouldn't mind seeing more of this.

Happy writing, and update soon!
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