Not bad. I'd like to see you get into Andy's head more upon learning he has a daughter. You can expand on this and show more reaction from the other members of the WKRP staff.

One typo I caught in chapter 1. "The he turned" should be "Then he turned."

Keep on writing.

This is pretty cool. You should definitely write more. Can't wait to see what happens...

it's off to a very good start. i love wkrp and i think you will do an excellent job at this story

this story has a lot of potential, update soon

I really liked the story and I think that Andy would've made a great dad. He was so cute and funny in the show.

Karen

Pretty interesting story...I too would like to see a little Andy/Bailey involvement...also, who's the mom? Linda?

Wow hunny, this is an amazing start!

Please stop the cliffhanger and post a new chapter!

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I guess google keeps blocking your email,a nd it's making me mad! I really want to talk to you, you seem so awesome and cool dearie!

Interesting beginning. Hope you continue. I think you definitely have their voices. I could hear Herb's whining all the way here! LOL.

I like this and want to see more! I loved Andy and hope to see Bailey involved in this story too, because he was always kinda sweet on her! :)

I like this, keep it up! :)