hi there, just thought i'd give you your thousandth review. unless i'm too late, of course. then nevermind.

Chimera was lovely and definitely will always be one of my favorite stories of all time. keep writing!

This was such a lovely story.

Chatoya I felt was probably the best developed character in this story. I could feel her anguish, her heartbreak, and her love throughout the chapters. The feelings you evoke through your characters are amazing. While Blue was definitely a hard character for me to swallow because he is such an antithesis of what I feel the heroine should deserve, he was definitely very interesting to read.

I also felt the concept that while everyone may be destined to have a soulmate they may not necessarily love them is an interesting take on the soulmates/bonds.

This story was epic and I'm so glad I read it. Hope you will continue to write!

There were on his arms that she had never noticed; they only showed now because he was icy-pale all over, as though he'd slid through the surface of an arctic lake and couldn't find his way out again.

- They were on his arms? There were on his arms what she had never noticed?

He was deaf, and dumb, and blind, and tainted, and Tam wouldn't' want him

- Extra apostrophe at wouldn't'

"I've never been about fair," he heard his own voice say as he leaned closer to her. Fireblade's words, and Fireblade's voice, but this was not Fireblade's feeling, this yearning to protect her, to curl her in his arms and makes her his in a way that could not be broken by time or place or person.

- to curl her in his arms and MAKE her his?

Same as previous chapter:

"He didn't look any less fierce sleeping. It was strange; almost every other Nightworlder she looked somehow vulnerable in sleep." - she looked at? she saw looked somehow? Missing something, anyhow.

"He was standing in the doorway, watching though as though something perplexed him, though there was nothing that showed that in his expression:" - Same as my comments on previous chapter, extra 'though'? Meant to be a different word?

Spelling/ grammatical/ sentence structure errors of some sort? Missing words?

"As she let him bear her off, she could have sworn she a whisper light as a kiss brushed her ears." - Missing word heard?

"And I thought Tam was the unfortunate one," he muttered to the air. "I hope Bernie runs into her. She's make mincemeat of him." - She'll?

Have noticed these sorts of little errors with the previous chapters as well, but been too caught up in the story to actually stop and tell. You spin a story exceptionally well.

I want more Blue n Toya scenes !

I loooove this fic. Perfect :)

This was really good. Your writing is just gorgeous- the imagery, all of the wonderful description just spot on. And all of the characters were so well done. Overall, I have to say kudos for the way you've depicted the relationships between the characters. There's redemption and recovery, but it's hard fought and still painful.

The only thing is I'd like to see a little more of the supporting characters at the end. It seems like they just kind of faded into the background, and for me it seemed like some of them got confused or blended together. However, there were a lot of characters and the masterful way you handled Toya and Blue made up for anything else.

Will there be a sequel? It seems like you have enough to work on for one. Anyways, nice job. Keep up the writing.

-Charlee

I have to say that your story is a job well done! In fact its beyond excellent! A beautiful and well written story which goes into a great depth.

Firstly I would like to compliment your characters! They are individual and strong and unique in their own special way. All of them! Especially Blue, Chatoya and Cougar. I love Blue's character!

Secondly the relationship between Blue and Chatoya is wonderful and closer to reality than most! Usually people make soulmates all lovey dovey and caring and willing to sacrifice their life for the other but Blue and Chatoya are a unique couple. I see many resemblances between them and Margaret Mitchell's Gone With The Wind characters Rhett Butler and Scarlett O'Hara. And they are my ultimate favourite!

Thirdly I hope you continue this mesmerizing tale with your charming tales and twists!

I've read your story dozens of times and it never fails to make me cry. I find it so beautiful. This is my first story review and I just want to say that I love this story.

Good job!

I love it, Chimera was amazing, I think that this was good enough to have been published, sometimes I even thought it was a real book. It was just that good. I absolutely loved it!

Oh wow. I read Chimera again this week, but didn't have the Epilogue (no net connection) - which I've just read now. I can't even remember reading it, the first part seemed familiar, but not the rest - but anyway, it was wonderful. That last touch with the videotape, brilliant. You've done such a great job in creating such interesting, complex characters, neither completely good or evil - which is hard to do.

As others have already mentioned, just change the details and get your work published already! I prefer your Nightworld over the original one (your NW being the first I read, in fact)!

Glad to see you're still writing fics. Please carry on! I love reading your work. :-)

wow this was long and at points i just wished it would be over but now that i finished reading it i want more. justt like every other good story i want it to never end just like this one. this fic took me a couple months and i seriously think that if you change up some thing so that it isn't too much like the night world you could get this published onto a book. many people would read it and i think this would be extremly popular. great job on everything this story was awesome and i just wished it could have a sequel. good luck with any future projects

you... you are just pure amazing. the characters are amazing. the plot is amazing. i absolutely LOVE your story, and sincerely think that you could get it published. its probably over 350 pages, and really, it's intensely interesting. do you write for a living? because you should.