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girltype 5/3/05 . chapter 43
have I mentioned that I love and adore you? I just can't remember, either way I do. love and adore you. i'm so happy there was more written on this story. you just don't know the extent of my happiness. poor 'toya.
valene 5/2/05 . chapter 43
OMG! I had hope and prayed for this fic to continue. Hell, i love Blue, he's such a wicked character. Lets hear more about him. Besides that, what a teaser, i cried when it was done. Can't wait till the next installment.
You updated 5/2/05 . chapter 43
Thank you. Bless you. And please- write more?
incarnated-soul 5/2/05 . chapter 43
Epilogue taster indeed. I never in my wildest dreams thought you would update and yet you have.

First of all I want to make this clear: you are an amazin, brilliant and extremely talented writer. I wouldn't be surprised if you were a real author...are you?

Chimera is an amazing story with so much going for it. Its like a chimera. I love your writing style and how you have so much power over words and how you make even the simplest sentences beautiful. I can actually feel Chatoya's emotion in this chapter- you are better than good. Chatoya is so messed up, i can only describe her feelings as dead and yet she feels so much pain.

God, I don't know what else to say- you probably get loads of reviews saying you're fabulous, I feel stupid. You know you've created a world within a world and I love you for that. Chimera is one of my favourite stories and has every reason to be everyone else's too. Update soon!
Shelli 5/1/05 . chapter 43
Nice. Don't suppose you're thinking of giving this one a happy ending... oh. Thought not. Still, any ending is better than no ending hint hint.

And it would be great if something good happened to Cougar, as well. Maybe he could punch Blue... think about it.
connor 5/1/05 . chapter 43
amazing. i have no idea where this is going, but at least it doesn't end where it did anymore. 'll be very interested to see how she manages to speak to blue. great story, glad you're still writing.
Nokomiss 4/30/05 . chapter 43
*happy sigh* You have the lovliest timing. Here I am, finishing up a truly heinous year of college, and suddenly there's part of the epilogue of Chimera, which I have been awaiting for ages (not that I'd complain...), all shiny and new and ready to read.

Toya's all screwed up, isn't she? I had the urge to smack her in the beginning, though she happily was looking more lively by the end of the part. Nothing like a disasterous possibilty to snap her out of her funk. (I barely resisted saying 'blues' there.) It's interesting to see how different Hael and Blue are. Makes you wonder how much Blue is influenced by Hael. Sad though it is, even though I've read and adored My December, I still want those two crazy kids to get it together.

Even though Jepar isn't my favorite character of yours, you still write compellingly enough for me to be curious about this prophecy and what's going to happen. Seeing more of the Pursang boys will be great, too. I swear, your stories are like crack. I've been reading them for so freakin' long, yet still want more.

Anyways, great work, as always. Hope to see the next part soonish!
Evlin 4/29/05 . chapter 43
Yes, your back!Poor Chatoya. So many hardships to overcome, so many dreams destroyed. Can't wait for the next chapter. I have one question though, will you be writing Lisa's story soon? I really want to know about her past and why she's hiding her write soon:):):)Bye!
Pyrope 4/29/05 . chapter 43
OMG! What a hell of a taster,.,., I whimper in suspense. When I saw the update e-mail in my inbox, I swear I almost had a heart attack. And when I saw it was chimera, I shooed everyone trying to get to the computer away! LOL

Bringing back Kheo would be mighty interesting... And of course, forcing Toya to talk to Blue makes it all the better. She can still feel the loss of Blue and it certainly shows, but perhaps the next tidbit will show a bit of Blue. Winks LOL. Well I'll be back at the next part of the epilogue.
Chang shik ah 4/29/05 . chapter 43
OMG! i had begun thinking that you were never going to get round to updating the epilogue. even if it is only the first part- i cant wait for the rest of it.

you are such an incredible write. you have introduced even more complications, and here was me thinking that epilogues were supposed to resolve all. but hey, thats just me and my ignorance speaking, lol. is that how blue and chatoya start talking again? after they destroy the wrath of kheo together? or is all all of this going to be resolved in another atory?

wow. i really cant wait for the rest of the parts, but at the same time i dont want this story to end. it is definately one of the best stories i have ever read.

ps- i cant wait to meet blue again. yay! bluey goodness. or badness;-)
Shiegra 4/29/05 . chapter 43
ARGH! MUST...HAVE...MORE! **puppy dog eyes* please?
untilhellfreezesover 4/29/05 . chapter 43
Fantastic as always... great to know you plan to carry on chim. for a while longer. You're writing continues to amaze me. You can go from writing the most heartfelt love scenes to comedy that could make the grim reaper laugh. But what you do the best, in my opinion, are scenes like this, where I can feel every emotion a charcater is feeling as if they were my own. Kudos and hurry with the next chapter!
silverclaw13 4/29/05 . chapter 1
Nice. It's easy to see how you've improved as the story goes on. I found the first few bits had a bit too much description for me that weren't really much use to the story, but as I read on it became really engaging. I love that you've managed to avoid a lot of the cliches, a little too forced it seemed sometimes, but the last game especially between Blue and Chatoya were done really well. Have you read anything by Gravidy? I'm addicted to God of the Lost (practically drooling each time she updates). I think you might like her too. She does HP fanfic, I think, and she's my absolute favourite writer.
Marie Vulffe 4/28/05 . chapter 43
! I was SO hoping to see how she handled her very next meeting with Blue, if that is indeed what's going to happen...we saw them years later in 'My December,' but they'd already moved on to the next game, it seemed. - I really enjoy how you make her have a more practical, almost business-like side, and then her more 'human' side, the one that defies logic and practicality. It makes her more likeable {though she's always been one of my faves...} The letters and whatnot about Jepar is very intriguing...still more drama to come with the dragons, i see. It was odd to see both Hael and Kheo in Blue, by the way...a foreshadowing, random observation, or deliberate red herring? O_O

And what in god's name will ever happen to Lisa and Vaje? I love every single bit with him in it; he's kind of like the canine version of Jepar, only less sunny _ I'll be waiting for your updates anxiously! _ Good stuff, as always. You write so beautifully, it's almost poetic.

...and one more thing. CERN? ;_; that's all i'm going to say.
Shards-Of-Ice 4/28/05 . chapter 43
OMFG. an epilogue! this is the bomb. honestly. its late, i haven't done my homework, just had a dance concert where i messed up, but this totally makes up for it. YES! it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy. keep up your awesomely spiffy work!
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