more more soon!

.YAY!YAY!YAY!YAY! THE BEST I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE LONG IS IT GOING TO BE?NO DON'T TELL ME:)

it was a very good part so far. it makes u want to find out what happpnes next. good story.

Yay - it's up! Ooh, a killer for Blue? Sounds exciting... _ I want to find out who she is, and I can't wait for Blue and Toya to meet! D Heh... Anyway, good start, and interesting too... Can't wait for the next part!

this is so exciting! it's a great start and you've already set the plot perfectly. i can't wait to see blue and chatoya stuck in a room together again or for more chapters. more more more.

Oh! Great start. Please hurry with the next part. I'm begging you, I've waited for this story for ages. Hurry! Or bad things will happen. Water Angel.

Well, this was as amazing as all of your writing. Someone trying to kill Blue? I feel sorry for them. Because you won't let anything happen to Blue...right? And Chatoya's dream... for some strang reason, I kept imagining her in the frozen topiary maze in the Shining. I can't wait for the next part!

ooooo i wonder who it is that wants to kill Blue... hang on, wouldn't it be more accurate asking who doesn't wanna kill him? anyway, i can't wait for the rest of it Ki - and i dunno why you were nervous posting this cos it's awesome! (or at least will be once you get it all up)

Yeah! Oh I love it! It sounds really good! But who and why would send someone to kill Blue...never mind, stupid question...it's Blue. But oh that sounds realy good! That and I remember this one part from Shimmer that said that Chatoya would experince emotional and physical pain if the spell ever broke? Will that ever happen in this one? I wonder how that would effect Blue...*thinks for a moment and finds that her head is hurting...* I really like it!

awesome! i'vebeen hopin' this one would show up soon... but for the record, I am a HUGE fan of happy endings...]

oooo! this is a good start! i wanna know whats goin on!