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| YSRS 2008-07-11 ch 9,  | abusenice, good job |
| Keggers 2008-07-02 ch 9, | abuseWhere has the humor gone? That was the reason I got into this story in the first place. The whole situation seems too serious. While I understand that you may be trying to take the fic in a more serious direction you need to keep that wit that you had in the opening chapters. While you may have the odd quip here and there, there is nothing like the hilarity of the Russian roulette playing Gamma in ages. Negatives aside this is good, very good and beautifully written. Although the what happened between Ivan and Zhang Yi in chapter nine was abit unlikely considering that they were best friends just two chapters ago. |
| Procrastinators Maximus 2008-06-30 ch 9, | abuseStill a great story, I like it a lot. Keep writing it! (sorry this isn't a good review, I'm terrible at writing ANYTHING) |
| Procrastinators Maximus 2008-06-16 ch 6, | abuseYay for two updates on one day! And the story is getting more and more interesting. I really like it, keep writing. |
| Keggers 2008-06-05 ch 4, | abuseYou killed kush! What the hell? But great all the same I like the seriousness of the chapter. Just try not to go too dark, please |
| Keggers 2008-05-12 ch 2, | abuseUPDATE! (This goes for chapter 4) |
| hiiamthief 2008-05-08 ch 3, | abuseyes an update. thank u anyways this is awsome. |
| Keggers 2008-05-07 ch 3, | abuseOH MY GOD! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE THIS NOW! |
| Procrastinators Maximus 2008-05-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, keep updating. |
| YSRS 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseNice , great story |
| Red Crown 2008-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI must say that was freakin hilarious. "Um, make that two headshots." I thought that was funny. You would think that PAC soldiers were be smarter than that. |
| Lt. Wolf 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abusehaha...i love it... "you want a grenade with that?" |
| bookboy238 2007-08-24 ch 2, | abuseVery funny:) |
| Bl1zz4rd M4n 2007-08-15 ch 2, | abuseHAHA, this story keeps getting better and better. I hope you don't mind if I borrow some of your ideas, like the more-than-five-silos stuff on my next chapter. |
| Bl1zz4rd M4n 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHAHAHAA! That's is the most funniest story I've read in I also like the bit where the Gamma Squad were playing Russian Roulette. Hilarious! |