awwwww

Really well written, and a nice take on how it could have ended.

i loved it! you write beautifully, and make everything believable.

any chance of you writing any m/w stories? pretty please?

Love this! Even though she took Ray from him, he trusts his son with only her.

MaxWhite stories are always good - yours went somewhere cool.

Thumbs up!

I really, really liked that. Great fic. It made me weepy, I always liked Ames, even as a villain so I'm glad that Max had pity on him in his death. I'm almost sorry it's over but where else would it go?

Thanks for posting.

-Ellie

Very good. I liked this. It's true too, they want his son safe and happy. Good work Bless!

Well that is very interesting I must say... good though. Liked it, nice work :D

well written. it was very touching. keep writing. :)