 Adair Coffin 2008-03-07 . chapter 1I know this was written last year- just came across this. Love, love love it. If I was searching for what I felt after Blind Spot this would be it. |
 Cataracta 2007-12-29 . chapter 1This was amazingly well written. I love this type of writing style, the sort of dry observation type, if that makes any sense. Awesome job, you captured Goren and Eames perfectly. |
 Nilima 2007-10-24 . chapter 1 Hey, I absolutely loved that story. So very well written and different! Thank you very much! |
 Sibs 2007-06-23 . chapter 1 This is exceptionally beautiful - it's really special. Please do continue. |
 moonstone2148 2007-06-22 . chapter 1 Hey There - emotive beginning - morse soon I hope = interested to see where this goes! GG |
 rindy713 2007-06-22 . chapter 1wow. nice! this is fascinating how they dance around each other's feelings. great move by alex. it's time for bobby to get with the program. |
 The Confused One 2007-06-21 . chapter 1Aww. This is utterly beautiful. I adore this. :) Such emotion. I can really feel it. :) Great work. :) I'm looking forward to the next one. :) |
 ilyahna 2007-06-21 . chapter 1You're a fantastic writer...possessing quite a unique style. I find myself so disappointed that you ship two incompatible detectives, but to each their own, huh? Let me know if you ever compose anything original, because I shall definitely read it (and I didn't mean that in a derogatory fashion). |
 heddywouldgo1 2007-06-20 . chapter 1Wow. I'm totally stunned by this piece. It is by far the best post-ep fic I've ever read and definitely one of the most well-written stories out there. I really liked your version of Alex. Thanks for putting this fic out there. It's my new favorite story :) |
 pagination 2007-06-20 . chapter 1As always, your stories are such joy to read. You have so many beautiful little touches in there that it's plain that you really watch people and the small, human gestures that most people overlook or take for granted. Your language and your character voices are lovely. The touch about the car, (the line about "his face conveys an ever-changing array of punctuation marks!") --lots and lots of stuff.
Also, I love the background of other characters and the way they weave through the lives of the two main characters. Yay for Logan and Barek and Wheeler and Ross!
It was a pleasure! |
 boohoo650 2007-06-20 . chapter 1This story was so monumentally beautiful that I don't know if a review can do it justice. Your use of imagery was incredible. My favorite parts/lines were when Bobby was talking about getting in the wrong side of the car, "There will always be violence in his desire for her," "I don't know what to do with people who get better," and at the very end with the description of Alex's heart. This was beautiful, dark and twisty and I can't wait to see more from you. |
 danielle 2007-06-20 . chapter 1 I loved the line "you woke me up with your brain". I can't wait for more. |
 Souhaite 2007-06-20 . chapter 1How I wish that you wrote more CI fics. That was wonderful in so many ways. Thank you. |
 myrtlegroggins 2007-06-20 . chapter 1Wow, this was great. I especially liked the little things, like how he continued to bring her coffee and get into the wrong side of the car, while she was still in the hospital.
Blind Spot is my fav episode and this was a great expansion of it. I look forward to your interpretation of the rest of the season, because there is certainly a lot to expand on. :-)
Great job. |
 Metisse 2007-06-20 . chapter 1Wow, this is marvelous! Can't wait to see more. :-) |