wow that was great! that actually felt like it was canon, i'm not sure if it was or not, but either way great work!

Aw man that was beautiful... I wish I could write like you.

Brilliant.It's really touching.Makes you wanna hug your father and never let him go.

i really love it, but why is naruto not there?

Very moveing. I think I shed a tear. Awesome job.