Simply beautiful! I was completely moved and shocked when Naruto tells Jiraiya who the real father figure is.

“You...a-are...”

That sold it :) I actually cried.

Amazing.

aw sweet!!

lol u made naruto kinda gay in the end but stil good story

Never thought of this as a posibility. It makes me think: yeah, I think he felt that way towards Jiraiya.

It's a pit he died though.

I wonder how old is Naruto in this story, I imagine him as a 13 something or as a 20 something.

It's beautiful, I do believe that what really matters is the things you have gone through with that person and the development of your relationship with certain person to call him your father. (I want my 'father' to burst into flames, he doesn't count as a father to me)

I'm inspired to go back to this fandom.

Take care,
Kaori.

Yes, yes this was very, very good.

First naruto fic i've read where he doesn't acknowledge the fourth as his father. I'm so happy! even if it is a one shot. I'm so sick of fic having the big reveal and then have him reach acceptance after one talk.

i kinda imagined it like that, actually...

That was sweet and sad.

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BUNNY

Good job on this one.

hmm...i can't see naruto actually acting this way, they boy's too selfless and more mature in certain ways that even adults aren't. i mean, if he had a choice, would he want for kyuubi to never have been in him? no. he would be dead by now without the power and so would a lot of his precious people. and it's not like yondaime had a choice. yeah, i'm sure naruto would be upset, but it's clear he would understand as well, instead of blaiming all of his life's problems on a man long dead.

Damn. That must have hit him like a mental bitch slap.

damn...
you made me cry...

omg, that was something..Ü great one-shot

AW!i got teary at the end...soo sute...