Wow that was a good ending. Noah is right too many people are silent that's the problem. The law is another problem, very corrupt for it allows child abusers to get away. I still think the teacher should've called teh law.

What the heck? If the teacher knows what's going on why doesn't she call the police? Why isn't anyone acting? *This* is how child abuse continues...

What a sick creep. Why don't the kids go to the police? Sad this happens in the world in even worse proportions. Stupid big business guy owned world allows these sickos to have the law on their side. SHows how messed up this world is.

Anyways I hope the Kapahalas & friends find out soon this isn't healthy at all.

I agree with Chris it was Riley's fault. Everyone tried to stop her but she was being competitive and not listening. Though it would be nice for Chris to visit her as he is *partially* responsible and he should at least visit her.

I think the girls are a bit angry/judgmental like most girls their age. Rhuben shouldn't have cut in in the Johnnys(lol) conversation or Johnny & his grandfather's conversation. Itwas a bit rude. Nice story...

Sick child abuse there. Hope the Capahalas find out & stop this.

Where is Sam in thsi story?

Your story is so touching! I cried when I read it.

Keep it up!

Great story. But I think it's really sad that the amount of abused children in AMerica is going up. Everywhere you look there are runaways and child care homes. The book "Am I Going to Heaven" is really good, and it's about runaways.

Nice story. But is it really yours or did you steal this one too?

This was a great story! Are you gonna make a sequel?

aww that wuz such a good story...i love the ending...im gonna read it again! :-)

really great chapter! if this is the ending, please make a sequel!

another rockin update like always cant wait till the next one.

ShadowWolf

wow chapter twelve was amazing! cant wait for the next one! update soon!

tia :-)

Great job! Update soon!

ya know this story is just like the book "a child called it"! and btw did u make up the character sydney? or is he from the movie?