|Reviews for Hold On|
| Johnny Tsunami fan 4/16/09 . chapter 13
Wow that was a good ending. Noah is right too many people are silent that's the problem. The law is another problem, very corrupt for it allows child abusers to get away. I still think the teacher should've called teh law.
| Johnny Tsunami fan 4/16/09 . chapter 11
What the heck? If the teacher knows what's going on why doesn't she call the police? Why isn't anyone acting? *This* is how child abuse continues...
| Johnny Tsunami fan 4/16/09 . chapter 9
What a sick creep. Why don't the kids go to the police? Sad this happens in the world in even worse proportions. Stupid big business guy owned world allows these sickos to have the law on their side. SHows how messed up this world is.
Anyways I hope the Kapahalas & friends find out soon this isn't healthy at all.
| Johnny Tsunami fan 4/16/09 . chapter 7
I agree with Chris it was Riley's fault. Everyone tried to stop her but she was being competitive and not listening. Though it would be nice for Chris to visit her as he is *partially* responsible and he should at least visit her.
| Johnny Tsunami fan 4/16/09 . chapter 3
I think the girls are a bit angry/judgmental like most girls their age. Rhuben shouldn't have cut in in the Johnnys(lol) conversation or Johnny & his grandfather's conversation. Itwas a bit rude. Nice story...
Sick child abuse there. Hope the Capahalas find out & stop this.
Where is Sam in thsi story?
| HPandu 4/11/09 . chapter 13
Your story is so touching! I cried when I read it.
Keep it up!
| HPandu 4/11/09 . chapter 4
Great story. But I think it's really sad that the amount of abused children in AMerica is going up. Everywhere you look there are runaways and child care homes. The book "Am I Going to Heaven" is really good, and it's about runaways.
| Story Watchdog 8/5/07 . chapter 13
Nice story. But is it really yours or did you steal this one too?
| Lady Cookie-Monster 7/16/07 . chapter 13
This was a great story! Are you gonna make a sequel?
| KataangSoKai11 7/16/07 . chapter 13
aww that wuz such a good story...i love the ending...im gonna read it again! :-)
| ashleymiles60176 7/16/07 . chapter 13
really great chapter! if this is the ending, please make a sequel!
| ShadowWolfDagger 7/15/07 . chapter 12
another rockin update like always cant wait till the next one.
| KataangSoKai11 7/15/07 . chapter 12
wow chapter twelve was amazing! cant wait for the next one! update soon!
| Lady Cookie-Monster 7/15/07 . chapter 12
Great job! Update soon!
| KataangSoKai11 7/13/07 . chapter 11
ya know this story is just like the book "a child called it"! and btw did u make up the character sydney? or is he from the movie?