YAY for reading author's-notes! Since I'd already read ch. 362 and knew about the real fourth mouth(thank Jashin for the Akatsuki tradition of stripping before you get killed > Because I knew where you were IMPLYING it was...but I also knew where it REALLY was...anyways, no more ranting. I lol'd, by the way >>

Lol I have to say, the reviews for this story are almost as funny as the story itself! Since I read this way after it was originally published, I had this horrible idea involving Deidara's large tongue on his chest...so...like...a little rimming action. To put it nicely. :P

And after reading the little edit, I still understood what you were saying. I swear, sadly, most of fanfictiondotnet is made up of little 13 to 16 year old girls, and even though this is a writing site, as in, for people who probably aspire to become writers one day, most of them are idiots. No offense to teen aged girls, of course. There are many writers on this site, once you pick through the garbage, that are amazing. And way way way better than me. :P Sorry to ramble on...

So I loved this story, it was so hilarious! I finally got around to reading it! And reviewing!

~Jen

Oh, you idiots. Deidara's fourth mouth isn't anywhere dirty. It's on his chest. But because this story is written before the revealing chapter, the author simply filled the story with crack and put Deidara's fourth mouth in... an unmentionable place. So, let's review little children, Deidara has four mouths actually. One on his face (duh), one on his left hand, one on his right hand, and one smack in the middle of his chest. The one on his chest can be unsealed, fed clay, then Deidara turns himself into a living time bomb.
~Para

CRACK FILLED COOKIES! lol nice story, now wheres my cookie?!?!?! juts joking, it was a good story.

danget tell me where the 4th mouth is! E-Mail me and HOW did he show him!! (: is it on deidaris weiner!? or butt!?

CRACK.









that is all

hahaha Tobi is so dumb! lol

I already knew about the fourth mouth and was going through all kinds of things he could do with it that would hurt like hell even if he used lube. @_@ Needless to say I have a pretty dirrty mind. *nose bleed* XD

So...You can tell me, yeah! WHERE IS his fourth mouth? I have two ideas, but both just don't make sense, yeah?

PLEASE TELL ME!





Yeah.
















HOPE I ANNOYED YOU! Yeah!

OMG! When I read chapter 362 ALL I could think about was this story! I want to thank you for lightening the mood on an otherwise hopelessly depressing chapter, so thank you! Great story!

aw! That was dirty! lol. It made me laugh... NL WANTS A CRACK FILLED COOKIE! HAND OVER THE CRACK! -gives Dei plushie- Pwease? lol
=^.^=

wow... oh and just to let you know, Yaoi is actual gay sex. Shonen-ai is boy love... so I wouldn't say Yaoi if I were you. If anything, I would say implied Yaoi.

but the story was funny. Hah... Tobi forgot his meds...

Omg that was funny! HAHA tobi asked for it too and he got it too!! Oh man i need a breather... okay i'm fine no-hahahaha!!
Man my side hurts now this fic freakin hilarous!!

Do I get HIDAN'S crack filled cookies? I'm sure you could think of a way to get them from him for me... Hidan -drools- oh well. Tobi is a very strange boy, though you portrayed his personality well... and I'm scared to ask, but where exactly is this four mouth of Deidara's? If it's where I think it is, then I'm scared for life... -twitch-
~Mitchi~

I i dont get it @.@ :3