yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

Quite an interesting chapter as the plot sickens...of course.

I did not enjoy the section where Superman was needing to defend himself, however I suppose that was the intent it and the emotions I should be left with.

I really do enjoy the dialogue between Lois and Henderson. Ah, that sneaky Natasha, I had a feeling something was up with her, just had a sneaking suspicion. Maybe I'm wrong. Who knows? I'll have to keep my eyes peeled.

Interesting part. Like the way this keeps growing.

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

I can't wait to read your next chapter!

Wow! You throw enough twists into this line to make a net! Clark's new "assistant" is obviously involved; there's likely some conspiracy between "Eastern" financial interests, who make money off the conflict, and Richard's connections, Lana's European connections, and this now-deceased lady at GNN.

This is really well-paced, and the interactions pretty solid and characteristic. What are they going to find in the fudge?

Fantastic story! Plzz update soon:)

Great stuff, really well written and immensely interesting. Its really amazing to read and just an overall awesome storyline that is juicy and engaging. Its also unique and fresh, grabbing your attention and making you want to read whats gonna happen next. Great work on your development and on the use of transitions and cliffhangers. Great work and keep it up.

*facepalm* CLARK! You've got the media after you like bloodhounds, and you FLY INTO THE HOTEL ROOM?!?!

Wow. That is a whole new level of Kent idiocy right there.

Oh, crappity crap. This is getting more complicated by the minute -- how the hell do you planning on getting them out of it without revealing Clark's other suit?

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

HEY! Get back here! I want to know what happens next!! I always love a good 'everybody finds out Clark is Superman' and this could be a REALLY good one!!

Love it!

Well done part. Nicely done background on Clark and football. I always like the way you mix the various histories to create a solid background. Clearly this Lana is more L&C with some Smallville then the Lana of the movies.

"with great power comes great responsibility"? isn't that spider-man?

Oh, THERE'S an interesting twist to the tale!